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@triciaal I need a thesis statement for something.

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@ashhhrodriguez

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@bohotness

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yees

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? i dont understand

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wait!!!! jeez

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Write your thesis statement about the Effectiveness of Advertising in the space provided below.

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Questions to research: Are advertisements aimed at teenagers effective? And, are they ethical?
My Response: Yes they are because most teenagers are about the name brand, so therefore they are usually effective. Not as much as ethical, because teens are more prone to ads because they want to “fit in”.

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Clothes is the topic

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I got this.

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thank you?

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Alright I think its just simply. Advertisements aimed at teenagers are effective.

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Yeah or no ?

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yay

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i think ok but not enough for a thesis statement.
a thesis statement should give enough for you to pull out your 3 topic sentences.

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sorry @ Brostep0 read the lower post not your original response

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that's what I thought. the first sentence is called an attention grabber, which what she put. I just don't know how to cover three topics. "Three ways that clothing advertisements are...?

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Haha youre completely right ! For some reason I was thinking of a theory.

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@Brostep0s My Response: Yes they are
The question will be answered in your paper
The statement is just the sentence what you think
example using what you have
Adverisments aimed at teenagers are usually effective because they focus on name brands and care about their " social status with friends" .

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social status with friends will cover your section on fitting in

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hope this helped but try to tag me only for math

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right. my sincerest apologies

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correction with what I wrote
name brands and care should read
name brands and teenagers care

it's just that I have to think for English

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thanks for the medal

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see the importance of proofreading? if I left the sentence it would mean the Advertisments care since advertisments was the subject not teenagers

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Advertisements aimed at teenagers are very effective; yet not ethical. As for teenagers now a days are all about conforming. Doing whatever it may be to fit in and be cool. Such as the focus they have on name brands and the importance they put on their social status with friends. Therefore making advertisements majorily effevtie in accordance to teenagers. However these advertisements may not be so much as ethical. In accordance to teenagers its all about being cool.

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This is a lot better than what I had... lol thanks, huge helps!!

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Sorry about earlier ! I felt bad haha.