Question

what are the errors in the punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and grammar for this sentence

Now,thinking about the feeling of fear as he pedaled home along the river path,he remember that moment of palpable stomach-sinking terror when the artcraft had streaked above.

Answer 1

Now, thinking about the feeling of fear as he pedaled home along the path of the river, he remembered that moment of palpable, stomach-sinking terror when the artcraft (aircraft?) had streaked by above.

Answer 2

there's no spaces between the commas, "along the river path" needs to be reorganized, remember needs to be remembered, comma after palpable, is it supposed to be aircraft? if it's a sci-fi novel or short story it could have a weird word like artcraft but i'm guessing it means aircraft, "had streaked by" or include a noun such as "had streaked the sky above"