Question

Writing a poem for a class, let me know what you think. All criticism welcome!!

Answer 1

Shadow

You're a mix black and grey.
With no eyes or face.
Your outline is drawn by air.
In the darkness you disappear.

Answer 2

@HelpBlahBlahBlah

Answer 3

wow thats nice

Answer 4

Thank you, it's short but says alot!

Answer 5

Np and yes i agree

Answer 6

Very well written. You explain the feeling well

Answer 7

Thank you @hunter2kb

Answer 8

Lovely :)

Answer 9

Thanks @Destinymasha