plz read!!!!!!!!!! Homeschooling vs. Public Education By Sarah There are diffrences about Homeschooling and Public Education. But there are simalarites about Homeschooling and Public Education. Some things that will be compared and contrasted about Homeschooling and Public Eucation are, Having to pick clothes in the morning, what you learn, getting bullied, your daily routene and scoial interactment. It doesnt matter if you are homeschooled or public schooled,you still learn the same things! If you go to a public school you would learn, Math,Literature, GUM, Vocabulary, Art, Music, Spelling,
Comosition, Science and History. And if you are HomeSchooled you will learn the same things, Math,Literature, GUM, Vocabulary, Art, Music, Spelling, Comosition, Science and History. That is just one of the few things that HomeSchooling and Public Education have in common. The things you wear to school are diffrent. if you are HomeSchooling you can just wear your pajamas, or you can change into everyday clothes that you'd wear t the mall or movies. but if you go to a public school then you might have to wear a uniform, or eveyday clothes that you would wear to the movies or to the mall . that is the diffrences between clothes you can wear to public schools or if you are homeschooled. Your daily routines for homeschooling might be diffrent, but then again they might be simmilar from public schooling routines. your daily routines for if you are homeschooled might go something like this: wake up, eat breakfest, take a shower, brush teeth,get on the computer and start to do school, eat lunch,take a break, go back to school, eat dinner and be dont for the day. if you are puclicly schooled your daily routine might go like this, get up, eat breakfast, take shower, get dressed, brush teeth, wait for the bus, get to school, go to your classroom, learn, go to recess,eat lunch,learn some more, get homework,get on bus to go homeand get home and change clothes. That might be your daily routine. One thing that happens to kids who go to public schools is, bulling. if you go to public school then the chances of you getting bullied is very high.you might get bullied becuase you might be to short, to tall, are bigger than the other kids, or just because you are diffrent, i find it wrong to pick on people just because they are diffrent than everyone else. but if you are homeschooled then you might not get bullied at all. that is just a little on bulling. One more thing that Piblic Education can give you is, scoial interactment. If you are Piblicly Educated, you get to make friends and hang out with them all day. But if you are HomeSchooled then you might not get any social interactment, sure you can make friends, but its not tlike you get to see them everyday, chances are you might never get to see them. That is just a little bit about HomeSchooling vs. Piblic Education. I perfer HomeSchooling over Public Education, i mean sure Public Education can give you things like Social interactment, making friends and much more. but HomeSchooling can prezent bullying, and hurt feelings.
i know there is spelling errors i havent fixed that yet
shouldn't this supposed to be in the writing section?
well i wanted feedback on it.
AH, this would still be better in the writing section :)
are you doing comparative essay? Your ideas are good. Just try improving the use of vocabulary to avoid redundancies, spelling as you already mentioned and the organization of your ideas to make a smoother flow of ideas' connections.
thanks
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