Can i someone plz give me an example of a thesis statement

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brucebaner · Answer

@LeeEtchison

brucebaner · Answer

help me @LeeEtchison

anonymous · Answer

For anything in particular?

brucebaner · Answer

video games

anonymous · Answer

If you're using the example I suggested, then I'd say something along the lines of: "The excessive use of video games can be harmful to the player."

zbrandz23 · Answer

Thesis Statements are usually tells the reader exactly what the entire essay is gonna be about.

zbrandz23 · Answer

Some thesis starters you can start off with for example, I beleive, I think, I feel, I have observed, In my opinion, I have learned those are all thesis starters:) Hope that helped bro

anonymous · Answer

I'd say to revise it to: "Violent video games can be harmful to children, causing them to be more violent, because of the lack of censorship, normalization of violence, and intense graphics that these video games often feature." :)

brucebaner · Answer

thx @LeeEtchison

anonymous · Answer

No problem, hope you do well. ^_^
If you want, once you write your essay, I would be happy to revise it for you and offer input. :)