help me @LeeEtchison
can you help me make sure if this sounds right okay @LeeEtchison
What grade are you in, again?
8th grade why
Violent video games can be bad for kids, making them be more violent, because of the lack of censorship, normalization of violence, and intense graphics that these video games have. Some kids play too many video games. Studies have shown that these kids have lack of communication and physical activities, and that can lead to serious health conditions. Some people might argue that some facts have proven that there are some benefits about playing games. Like for example, in some studies they have shown certain video games can improve hand-eye coordination, and that it can help improve your problem-solving skills, and the mind's ability to process information. Now just add a paragraph at the end saying that the risks outweigh the benefits, and then say that violent video games are bad for kids.
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