Will Fan and Medal!! Help Me Please: Okay.... I've Been Trying To Write A Poem For This One Person And This I All I Got...
Roses are Red, Violets Are Blue You Don't Know How Much I've Been Loving You
It's For a Special Occasion, and I really want it to be amazing...... but thats all I have and its coming up In like a week, so can someone please help me?
What are some qualities you love about the person ? @_XxKittyKatxX_
Well he is smart, funny, and always enthusiastic. He is really nice, loves animals, and is very shy.@candiimonstaa
@candiimonstaa
Roses are red, Monsters are green Look in the mirror, You'll know what I mean XDD
i wouldnt do roses are red its unoriginal and cliche but if u want i can help u out
Sure @ispike
okay so personally i like to start off this type of poem with something that has to do with your senses. Like the way he touches your skin or how the world begins to seem brighter. Maybe even a scent? This is just one option if you dont want to start like that then let me know and i will think of another starter line
Ohh sorry for the late reply, I was out of town for the weekend and just got back at 11pm last night
I like the way the world seems brighter @isspike
Is this conversation over or can I join in and help?
yea @johnny34 u can help.
also you like the way the world seems brighter soooo try this As the fog in my eyes uncovers i know you in the room because the suns always brighter. im no longer blind because i can see you. When you touch my face its just you and me. A heaven on this earth could not compete because your presents makes me brighter the stars and the best i can be. or something like that
That's really good @ispike
Thanks I hope it helps and u can even make that longer
i look at you your smart ways animals come your way when your here my heart stops and the room gets brighter you have no idea how much i love you
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