Question

Which of the following is an example of effective sentence fluency?
A. Because I like to design graphics, I hope to one day become a software designer. Designing is my main hobby these days. It's the one things that makes me happy.
B. Because I like to design graphics. Because that's what makes me happy, designing software. One day, I'll be a designer of software. One day, I'll make money at my hobby.
C. Do the one thing that makes me happy. Being on the computer. That's all I want to do these days. I hope to one day become a computer programmer or software designer.
D. On the one

Answer 1

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Answer 2

A sounds the best to me

Answer 3

yeah I was thinking the same

Answer 4

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