Question

i have to right a essay can anyone help me with the one i wrote i need to no if its good or not

Answer 1

Sure just post it

Answer 2

ok hey this is what is has to be
1. Support your essay with your motivations, dreams, goals and aspirations, inspiration, plans, reasons, rationalizations, quotes, anecdotes, research.

2. Employ correct rules of sentence composition, grammar, and mechanics of style.

3. Use at least two references. Each reference must use a quoted passage and be appropriately cited to avoid plagiarism.

4. Include a bibliography at the end of the essay.

5. Turn in at least two full pages or up to three pages of writing, 12-pt. Times Roman, double-spaced.

6. Pay attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation.

7. Use this basic outline:
a. Introduction
b. Body Paragraph 1
c. Body Paragraph 2

Answer 3

THIS IS THE ESSAY


why i want to go to collage? I want to go to collage because i want to make something of myself i want to be to be successful and do great things in life. I am going to collage because i feel that what i want to do with my life matters to me, If i show that i can be successful in what i want to to in life then it will set a good example for my kids and my grand kids. As soon as i graduate, I will no that my life won't get any better knowing that i have completed what i have wanted to do for my entire life. I feel going to collage for me is going to make me for more proud of myself and knowing that i can do more things in life with this collage degree then what i could do before. I t want to make my kids and myself happy, I want to think as myself as successful all i am doing is just trying to find me,

I have a big family and my brothers and sister never went to collage i feel that my brothers and my sisters will look up to me when i finish this school. I want to go to collage because i love how it makes me feel knowing that i'm going to be doing what i love the most when i graduate from collage. I want to no that feeling of accomplishment knowing that i finished something that is tough and not that easy for most people to do. I want to go to collage knowing that its is going to be a long journey, But i am going to focus and dedicate all my time i have into my collage work, to get the education i need to do what i want and love to do. There was a time when i was bullied in my younger years of my life i was told that my life wasn't going anywhere that i wasn't going to be anything at all, To no that its not going to be true, to no that i will do something with my life is why i want to go to collage, that is why i am taking your school.

There are lots of reasons why i want to go to collage, when i was little i would want to be a docter i couldnt wait to get to collage to achieve those goals. but i no now that what you want when you were little doesn't mean that is what you are going to get. To no that i am coming closer to achieving my goal in finishing collage feels wonderful, I do no that its is going to be tough i have gotten though my first rounds of test and passed them, they were difficult but i studied well and i new that i could do it. believing in yourself will get you through a lot in life i no that from different situations even if there hard or easy or nothing at all trust yourself and you will get through.