Question

I NEED AN OPINION ON THIS SONG FOR MUSIC CLASS AND THERE IS NO ONE IN MUSIC.

Answer 1

[Intro]
So, i know i tell everyone to get serious
But, every now and then its healthy to let it go
So get ready
If i dont get this stuck in your head then...i dont think im doing my job
Hey, when [?] is in the green room we do it big in here
You dont even know what this is yet man

pellet, i guess you do now

Its off to work we go

[Verse 1]
Yeah hi ho, here I go
Like beer I flow
I steer my boat
Yes sir on the track I float
Cut slack like rope
Drop bars like soap
In the car I toke
Cigars an dope
Stay fly like a birdie, under par one stroke
Yeah, you won't get it till tomorrow
Stuck on point like a dart throw
Posted, see me on the wall like an art show
Talkin' bout lights, but where did all the stars go
Check it uhh, yeah put your iPhone down
Gather round gather round cause I’m home now
Turn the iHome down, you're in my zone now
And I gotta keep it comfy up in my home town

[Hook]
But, Yo
Mirror mirror on the wall on the wall
Who’s gonna really be the first to fall
No, no no not me
I write my own lyrics and I make my own beats
Yeah I tell ya that’s peace
I don’t ever go to work, I just go and take a seat
Then write another hook in my mac book
Then write another hook in my mac book

[Verse 2]
Repeat, tap both feet
Spark that pellet lean back in seat
An ah
I never work like an antenna
Said ah 757 I gotta be represent er’
From any other state, make friends not competitors
When I’m in the motha flutterin House like the senators
Gotta do work like a settler
Catch me on fly like a regular
I said, catch me on fly like malaria
Catch me on fly like an air craft carrier
Or better yet catch me on fly and et cetera, et cetera
Stuck on the cream like Bavaria
No barrier, I can keep an open mind every time I rhyme
You can find me underground like a terrier
I said, find me underground like they bury ya
Flow exported I was born in America
New to the area, see me on arrival
East coast kid going West like I'm Fievel
Roll another up, wave um buy like a tidal
Then off to work, say bi like a cycle

[Hook 2]
But I could do work, now let me interrupt
See me round the green like a diamond in the rough
See me on a roll like the wheels on the bus
And don’t worry bout my name, you gon know it soon enough
[B] Rogers, yeah really no bluff
They be little, young, kid I am growing up
And I’m never slowing up, but I’m never in a rush
So I’m always taken time when they tell me hurry up
Chill son, five more minutes
I gotta find the right place to rest my sentence
And I don’t even think I'm gon finish
Up until I get cheese effortless like a dentist
Mirror mirror, tell me how it is
I don’t go to work, I talk to the kids
So Hi Ho
Here I go
Like DJ Kool I clear my throat
Mirror mirror, tell me how it is
You don’t ever work, when you love this sh.it
So repeat tap both feet
Spark that sh.it, lean back in seat

Answer 2

https://soundcloud.com/itsbrogersyo/im-hi-ho

Answer 3

Okay its not your lyrics its BasicallyIDoWrk's Outro.Do you want to get copyrighted

Answer 4

I need an opinion... =-=

Answer 5

Well i guess im putting that....

Answer 6

i think its great :D even if its your version

Answer 7

Its not a bad song...But what grade are you in

Answer 8

8th

Answer 9

it was my elective

Answer 10

Okay well the teachers will kind of think its innapropriate.

Answer 11

And now i have to post a pic of me, that was eddited because i have a class for that and i need your opinion for that

Answer 12

what school do you go to?

Answer 13

FLVS

Answer 14

I edited the headphones to be green, they were red, but yea i also changed my shirt from one to another just by editing

Answer 15

pretty cool im in FLVS to. i dont like telling people my info lol