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OpenStudy (anonymous):

To prevent an unhealthy buildup of bacteria, bed sheets should be washed at least once a week. What is the best way to rewrite this sentence? Preventing an unhealthy buildup of bacteria, bed sheets should be washed at least once a week. To prevent an unhealthy buildup of bacteria, you should wash your bed sheets at least once a week. You should wash your bed sheets preventing an unhealthy buildup of bacteria at least once a week. Bed sheets should be washed at least once a week to prevent an unhealthy buildup of bacteria.

OpenStudy (jane11509):

The second one sounds best

OpenStudy (anonymous):

A few more?

OpenStudy (jane11509):

...

OpenStudy (anonymous):

xD

OpenStudy (jane11509):

Okay x.x

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Celia grabbed the food for the dogs from the pantry. Which of these is the best way to revise the sentence above to make it clear and effective? Celia grabbed from the pantry the food for the dogs. For the dogs from the pantry, Celia grabbed the food. Celia from the pantry grabbed the food for the dogs. The food for the dogs from the pantry Celia grabbed.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

n_n

OpenStudy (anonymous):

A. ?

OpenStudy (jane11509):

i guess

OpenStudy (anonymous):

YAS!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Which of the following sentences is the most clear and effective? Quieter and stronger than zippers and Velcro, Leonard Duffy has invented a new type of fastener. A new type of fastener has been invented to create a quieter and stronger fastener than zipper and Velcro. To create a quieter and stronger fastener than zipper and Velcro, a new type of fastener has been invented. Leonard Duffy has invented a new type of fastener that is quieter and stronger than zippers and Velcro.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

D.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

gtg

OpenStudy (jane11509):

K cya

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@NatsuTheSalamander I think either the first or the last one if best, for the Leonard Duffy one.

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