Question

can somone help me with this essay plssssss

Answer 1

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Answer 2

sweet lol the essay is



why i want to go to collage? I want to go to collage because i want to make something of myself i want to be to be successful and do great things in life. I am going to collage because i feel that what i want to do with my life matters to me, If i show that i can be successful in what i want to to in life then it will set a good example for my kids and my grand kids. As soon as i graduate, I will no that my life won't get any better knowing that i have completed what i have wanted to do for my entire life. I feel going to collage for me is going to make me for more proud of myself and knowing that i can do more things in life with this collage degree then what i could do before. I t want to make my kids and myself happy, I want to think as myself as successful all i am doing is just trying to find me,

I have a big family and my brothers and sister never went to collage i feel that my brothers and my sisters will look up to me when i finish this school. I want to go to collage because i love how it makes me feel knowing that i'm going to be doing what i love the most when i graduate from collage. I want to no that feeling of accomplishment knowing that i finished something that is tough and not that easy for most people to do. I want to go to collage knowing that its is going to be a long journey, But i am going to focus and dedicate all my time i have into my collage work, to get the education i need to do what i want and love to do. There was a time when i was bullied in my younger years of my life i was told that my life wasn't going anywhere that i wasn't going to be anything at all, To no that its not going to be true, to no that i will do something with my life is why i want to go to collage, that is why i am taking your school.

There are lots of reasons why i want to go to collage, when i was little i would want to be a doctor i couldn't wait to get to collage to achieve those goals. but i no now that what you want when you were little doesn't mean that is what you are going to get. To no that i am coming closer to achieving my goal in finishing collage feels wonderful, I do no that its is going to be tough i have gotten though my first rounds of test and passed them, they were difficult but i studied well and i new that i could do it. believing in yourself will get you through a lot in life i no that from different situations even if there hard or easy or nothing at all trust yourself and you will get through. I have been telling my kids that collage is really important to your life and goals, but since never when to collage my kids think they don't have to go either, so me going to collage is making me hope that it will put some thought in there mind that collage is important to dreams, and if i can achieve mine my kids can achieve there dreams and goals as well.

Even though my kids are fully grown there dreams and goals in life still matter collage education is important because with out it you wouldn't be able to do a lot. Me going to collage means that i could have a healthier life and a more successful career. I believe that if i go to collage it will make me feel better about myself knowing that i can do what i love. I feel that collage education is so important for your goals and dreams what would you do if you didn't have collage education? you couldn't do a lot of things, besides working cooking burgers all day. I am not saying that is bad but i wouldn't want to do that all my life yes its good money for when your a teenager saving for a car but for life that is a long time.

To sum everything up on why collage education is important, there isn't really a reason why it is important to me cause i have so many reason why i want to go to collage the education doesn't really get to me. If i had to say why collage is important to me, then i would say because i don't want my kids thinking that collage doesn't matter and i want to feel good about my self, i want to live my life doing something that i love doing, not something that i have to do just make it. I have a lot of reason why i want this for myself i just cant say one i will have to say them all, because collage is so important to me that i don't want to miss out on everything in life. I want to live life to its full this is why i think collage is so important to me

Answer 3

this is what i have to do


1. Support your essay with your motivations, dreams, goals and aspirations, inspiration, plans, reasons, rationalizations, quotes, anecdotes, research.

2. Employ correct rules of sentence composition, grammar, and mechanics of style.

3. Use at least two references. Each reference must use a quoted passage and be appropriately cited to avoid plagiarism.

4. Include a bibliography at the end of the essay.

5. Turn in at least two full pages or up to three pages of writing, 12-pt. Times Roman, double-spaced.

6. Pay attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation.

7. Use this basic outline:
a. Introduction
b. Body Paragraph 1
c. Body Paragraph 2

Answer 4

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