Question

Need feedback on a Christian Rap for my youth group. Here it is:

Answer 1

If you have evil in your head
Don't listen to the negative things said
But try to listen to God before you go to bed,
Even though you think you will go through life alone,
God is right there with a hand on your shoulder.
Since I have believed I have become bolder,
People with out God seem to get colder.
Don't go to the dark,
Come the the light.
All you have to do is fight,
Believe in God and he will change your sight.
Yes I know sin is pleasurable, but don't give in
I am not saying Satan isn't there,
But with God you have nothing to fear.
Jesus died on the cross because he cared.
But you have a voice to say no to evil.
But all you have to do is put your foot down.
You don't have to care if Satan does not like that sound.
But make yourself proud.
Let your voice be heard.
Your whole like is a test,
But you will know you live for the best.
You will know you will go to heaven and rest.
Just let God into your life
Don't be haunted by your past ghost,
God will love you the most,
So no need to boast.
Just believe God is your king.
I know some of you mope,
But you just have to have hope.
Cuz you aren't the only in the boat.
Amen

Answer 2

Its good :)

Answer 3

Thank you @loganisawesome151

Answer 4

its nice .:)

Answer 5

Thanks @danish071996

Answer 6

You put " come the the light"

Answer 7

oops sorry thanks @MineCraft632

Answer 8

No problem (:

Answer 9

But thank you guys for the feedback..it helped alot

Answer 10

\(\huge\color{purple}{nice ~ thinking :)}\)
only GOD can help us
we should never give up
never lose hope

Answer 11

Thank you @Nnesha

Answer 12

:)

Answer 13

that's really good. good job :)

Answer 14

Thank you! @mrbaconqwerty

Answer 15

It is alright @cierra.whisper

Answer 16

Thanks @Mesopretty

Answer 17

Np

Answer 18

Thank you guys so much for your feedback

Answer 19

all the rhymes are at the end of each line .-. it would be better to hear it with a sick beat and someone rapping it.
but still looks good

Answer 20

Right! @UsernameTaken tht is y I said Alright

Answer 21

My brother is making my beat..And I will most likely put it on YouTube and give you guys the link

Answer 22

alright

Answer 23

But is there anything you guys would add? @UsernameTaken @Mesopretty

Answer 24

right now i think its fine as is, but again i would like to hear a beat and the rap :)

Answer 25

I am also of the same religion, but I didn't really like the line "People without god just seem to get colder". Especially with a youth group, I feel as though even if someone isn't the same religion you should respect their views and teach them acceptance instead of ignorance.

Answer 26

Good job on this though! ^^

Answer 27

okay thank you soo much @colormealexa

Answer 28

i like it its good

Answer 29

Thank you @chucky00

Answer 30

Again thank you guys so much for your input.

Answer 31

I think ur a very good writer. It touched me i'm not any religion

Answer 32

@quin100 thank you. I am so glad it touched you:)

Answer 33

your welcome!

Answer 34

If you need any good christian rappers for your youth group, heres some...
lecrae
andy mineo
shonlock(kinda rapper) <- i met him in person and hes really nice.. he also made me and my sister sing and he recorded itO.o it was weird

Answer 35

interesting, you might want to shorten it a bit , though