Question

just working on a song ermmm opinions n such
You make me wanna drown
you make me wanna fly
you make me wanna breathe
you make me wanna die

Well I'm not listening
So just keep on screaming
you're making me bleed
ohhh babe it's killing me

flowing through my vain, In my DNA
You're a parasite, that's on my inside
so just keep holding on
Cuz I am almost gone
and soon it will be time
For the otherside to snatch me up at night

Wake me from my sleep
Oh this is all a dream
I made inside my head
My soul's already dead
so yeah that's all I have so far

Answer 1

@LyricalDevonne @Tazmaniadevil

Answer 2

@LOLAri @satellite73

Answer 3

Thats good=)

Answer 4

thank ya

Answer 5

@summerforever21

Answer 6

Loving the beat and opposite analogies, keep it up :) it's GREAT.

Answer 7

Thank you so much means a lot!

Answer 8

Anytime

Answer 9

@alesia/bailey

Answer 10

it's great.

Answer 11

just great

Answer 12

Thank you!