so what if its not a day to remember. so what if its not a night to forget? so what if the world stops spinning? maybe itll give me a chance to catch my breath.
yeah it fees like im falling in reverse. it feels like im falling off the earth. it feels like im going no where. i spent all my time trying to get there. well it wasnt worth it. your not worth two seconds of my life. oh well i guess ill just shoot for the high life. its harder then i thought moving on from you. close the door i dont want to be seen. she hurt me like a thousand needles in my arm.
remember when you told me id never b

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so what if its  not a day to remember. so what if its not a night to forget? so what if the world stops spinning? maybe itll give me a chance to catch my breath.
yeah it fees like im falling in reverse. it feels like im falling off the earth. it feels like im going no where. i spent all my time trying to get there. well it wasnt worth it. your not worth two seconds of my life. oh well i guess ill just shoot for the high life. its harder then i thought moving on from you. close the door i dont want to be seen. she hurt me like a thousand needles in my arm.
remember when you told me id never b

anonymous · Answer

be sleeping with sirens? howd id never meet pierce the veil?  well probably not but oh well i guess my demons are straight from **** or maybe there you im kinda confused. you coulda been my muse but then you made me blue

anonymous · Answer

@nickmifsud1223  @jossette5

anonymous · Answer

it stopped letting me type in the middle of a word?

anonymous · Answer

its a stupid thing haha  but i had fun and i feel sooooo much better now

anonymous · Answer

I like it actually. You have nice rhymes, but also remember that songs aren't/shouldn't just be rhymes with meaning. You can always not rhyme xD I forget what the technical words for certain techniques or whatever in poetry, but try looking up some tips and $10's says you'll learn something to make this a masterpiece :) But good job.

anonymous · Answer

really you mean? not to sound like a little kid but this ment alot to me

anonymous · Answer

@dannyjjb

anonymous · Answer

@perce you gave me the courage to post this

anonymous · Answer

Nah dude, I mean it. And you don't sound like a little kid xD When I wrote my first song, every compliment and every criticism helped me and meant a lot to me. It's all about improving man, so don't be upset if someone DOES say something you wrote is bad.

anonymous · Answer

really you mean it?
 i ment to say that not call you mean sorry just realized i did

anonymous · Answer

okay thanks nick ur a good person and friend

anonymous · Answer

i tagged one person that inspired several parts of this song
lol thats the only reason i tagged them

anonymous · Answer

:D Thanks man, that compliment made my night. If you ever post more songs or anything tag me :)

anonymous · Answer

I like it! I could already it in my head while I was reading!

anonymous · Answer

dude i kinda want somebody to say they dont like it
so i can say why?

anonymous · Answer

I do agree with Nick about the rhyming thing.

anonymous · Answer

did i rhyme alot?

anonymous · Answer

:D Thanks danny.
I mean, that's what (Not trying to diss on a music genre) mostly all rap does. Is just rhyme with some sort of meaning, not including the songs about girls, booty, cars, money, and weed. Don't be like other musicians and artists. Be unique and different, that'll get you somewhere good.

anonymous · Answer

Your welcome

anonymous · Answer

haha i was trying make it good

anonymous · Answer

sorry next song i do i wont rhyme as much

anonymous · Answer

Uh you mostly rhyme in the second part

anonymous · Answer

yeah sorry i kinda got stuck on lyircs

anonymous · Answer

I'm glad I gave you Some courage!  I like it, as previously stated.  And i hope whoever else reads it likes as-well. Because its really,really good.

anonymous · Answer

It's okay

anonymous · Answer

@HelpBlahBlahBlah  this is why

anonymous · Answer

you guys know what sucks?

anonymous · Answer

having a heart and still being inlove with somebody you hate

anonymous · Answer

worst mix of feelings ever

anonymous · Answer

@sleepyjess

anonymous · Answer

TBH I don't know about the whole sleeping with sirens line. But everything else was fine.

anonymous · Answer

haha it wass just me taking a stab at an ex of mine

anonymous · Answer

she said will you shutup youll never be sleeping with sirens and you wont ever meet pierce the veil

anonymous · Answer

oh okay

anonymous · Answer

and so far everybody hass liked it

anonymous · Answer

so i think my next step is to get a band right?

anonymous · Answer

yeah

anonymous · Answer

cool i think i know a bass player and a drummer

anonymous · Answer

im curious though how should ii sinng this cause i like it like a peirce the veil type sound but i wonder if i song it like my chemical romance or linkin park

anonymous · Answer

hmmmmm things to think about

anonymous · Answer

jossette please respond to my messages

anonymous · Answer

2nd option

anonymous · Answer

That's sounds pretty good:)

anonymous · Answer

okay danny and thanks missy

anonymous · Answer

god im shaking rn im so mad

anonymous · Answer

hey josette? get off my question!

anonymous · Answer

ur stiillll here!

haichi · Answer

chef y u mad at josette tbh I loved it!

anonymous · Answer

thx haichi and cause she was mean to me

haichi · Answer

in that case I dun like josette if cducky dosent like some1 well i dont like them either :D

anonymous · Answer

for no reason so she can get off my question

anonymous · Answer

hahah i like hachi lol

anonymous · Answer

shes gone!

haichi · Answer

YAY

anonymous · Answer

hahah

haichi · Answer

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