Question

here is a song i wrote:) hope u guys like it:) might need a little more but its the best i got so far:P

Answer 1

"The Harsh Winter"
the winter is near and your still on my mind.
my body is cold and you are in her arms.
where is the love you promised?
here still feeling the touch of a lovers grasp.
the roads i take are killing me.
maybe someday youll return to me.
no matter the distance i want to be with you.
just feeling the shock of your lips against mine.
the frozen heart without you here.
chilled to the single vein in only time counting.
taking every breath with no regret.
yet with a heart so warm its so cold.
you stand there so happy
with a smile to warm her heart.
it did the same to mine and more.
it warmed my whole world.
winter is here with me yet so far from you.
the touch of your whisper running down my spine.
i remember as if it was yesterday.
trying to pull together and walk away.
until i hear the sweet melody of your beautiful heart beat.
the smooth grasp it makes pulling at my frozen heart.
yanking and pushing at the same time.
your touch melts me even when remembering.
i see your still in her arms.
where is the love you promised?
go away cold winter.
for you have taken my heart and froze it not to love again.

Answer 2

i love it babe omg i love it

Answer 3

lol..thanks:)

Answer 4

@girlover @Gin_Ichimaru @_lilb_to_smooth_4_U_ @kira1502 @kingblitz @iambatman @I_Always_Smiling @thesweetheart3 @THEKIDREAL @LOLAri @jabez177 @just_one_last_goodbye @hotdancingbabe14 @linn99123 @thadyoung @BunnyBree @briannababe @bohotness

Answer 5

@morganchavez @jabez177 @whatsupluccas @UsernameTaken

Answer 6

@party_girl @pizza12 @angelic._. @Anon101 @ashhhrodriguez

Answer 7

Ugh too lazy to read but I'll do it then let you know :)

Answer 8

lol..ok @jabez177 thanks:)

Answer 9

@morganchavez

Answer 10

@morganchavez

Answer 11

@Tazmaniadevil why do u keep tagging her?

Answer 12

nice, i read it in heavy metal :P (thats what im listening to) screamed it a little, its really good.

Answer 13

@thesweetheart3

Answer 14

lol nice @UsernameTaken ur amazing thank you:)

Answer 15

hey babe i posted all of the people you are posting lol

Answer 16

ok..lol

Answer 17

@~ace_chambers~

Answer 18

@pinkalicious @LaceyLeanne @randomchick @RatzLover95 @Walkerman15 @WhisperZ @emmigrace222 @Emo<3girl @EmmaDrew94 @youngnephew34 @youngnephew34 @yanee

Answer 19

wassup @Tazmaniadevil

Answer 20

was good

Answer 21

yall message each other somewhere else..lol

Answer 22

aye we need feed back fo dis song g

Answer 23

lol:P

Answer 24

thaats why im inviting like all deez people

Answer 25

nun @Tazmaniadevil

Answer 26

i got that dork...:P

Answer 27

@Gixxer_J @unique<> @UnkleRhaukus @quin100 @hotdancingbabe14 @hemmoji @HANE1234

Answer 28

@unique<>

Answer 29

why yall call me bruh bruh @Tazmaniadevil

Answer 30

@Angel_Bear19 @agent0smith @alesia/bailey @angelic._. @shrutipande9 @sleepyjess @shifuyanli @shifuyanli @SkyRilio18 @savannah152426 @savannah152426 @summerforever21

Answer 31

@youngnephew34 tell ,me what u think about my babes song

Answer 32

lol.. ok taz stop calling me babe.. we r besties:) ok

Answer 33

like i said ur a very good writer.I cant wait to here the rest of it!

Answer 34

aww shi not again

Answer 35

I like it.
Good on you @Write0The0Right0For0Wrong0Doing

Answer 36

im bae :P #metalsingersgetallthegirls

Answer 37

thanks @quin100

Answer 38

it's not bad @Tazmaniadevil

Answer 39

no problem

Answer 40

ok morgan stop i dont love him but its fine be mad.. i will go

Answer 41

thnx @youngnephew34

Answer 42

@undeadknight26

Answer 43

Aye tbh with you bruh @Tazmaniadevil you look like soluja boy bruh like no lie

Answer 44

@leonardo0430 @drummerboyrevived @Donblue22 @Directrix @willsgirl16 @wio @Crissy15 @cierra.whisper @crazycathatesmath14 @ChipperJay* @Clongoria2 @Catlover5925 @fallenangelorchid

Answer 45

lol @youngnephew34 yo look my dady a liltbh doe no crepper bs lol

Answer 46

@JReed231 @Joel_the_boss @jesseroyals363

Answer 47

Wow that was pretty good. Not bad. I liked it a lot

Answer 48

its great :) follow me on instagram. kingsuave215

Answer 49

medal up @Write0The0Right0For0Wrong0Doing plz give her medal's for dis song

Answer 50

Its nice, i really like it :)

Answer 51

Amazing job @Write0The0Right0For0Wrong0Doing it is really good you do fabulous work! keep it up !!!!

Answer 52

lol thanks u guys... i love that u all like it:)

Answer 53

I'll have my cheesy bae @thesweetheart3 answer 4 me,

Answer 54

It's amazing, good job

Answer 55

ur bae?? ok

Answer 56

thanks

Answer 57

@JReed231

Answer 58

taz ur a good friend.. thanks for getting the song out there quicker than i would lol

Answer 59

your welcome bestie anything for you i would get a pice of the monn if you wnted it

Answer 60

lol

Answer 61

@freckles @Fireyredhead @daddyscupcake @dayani.laforest @JReed231

Answer 62

I love it, it has meaning, and I can relate.
I love your words, keep writing, I want to read more :)

Answer 63

and @Write0The0Right0For0Wrong0Doing fan any of them and they will fan you back lol if u need more fans

Answer 64

this song is fantastic! i love music as well and have tried to write my own songs in the past, but they've never turned out as well as ur song. keep it up and ull be famous!

Answer 65

awww thank you @Fireyredhead <3

Answer 66

no problem.

Answer 67

:)... and i will @Tazmaniadevil

Answer 68

ok @Write0The0Right0For0Wrong0Doing seeya on the other side lol

Answer 69

lol..ok buddy:)

Answer 70

@girlover @ilovewolf @issues101 @

Answer 71

@Compassionate @I_Always_Smiling

Answer 72

Nice... I like it :)
rate: 10

Answer 73

swagg^

Answer 74

thanks @ilovewolf

Answer 75

call me kate and your welcome

Answer 76

cool..:)

Answer 77

um taz pls say that through pm that is just gross just saying

Answer 78

ikr..lol delete it taz..lol

Answer 79

lol

Answer 80

lol my bad @Write0The0Right0For0Wrong0Doing lol and doll hush lol

Answer 81

lol make me

Answer 82

lol

Answer 83

i willl wanna now how @ilovewolf

Answer 84

Sure how

Answer 85

ill just kiss the shi out of ya hahahahaha

Answer 86

omg..pm her taz