Question

@LyricalDevonne @Dustinself42 @chefducky @bvblover83014 @MissIndie @Gin_Ichimaru @alesia/bailey
iv got a song in mind i want your feedback

Answer 1

(lies)
everything you ever said was a lie
why be in my life at all?
if you just going to walk away

(lies every word out of your moth is a lie)
why must you hurt me why must you say you love me
kowing your causeing pain

i love you but your trouble
and ill miss you but you need to leave
i can wait till you'v changed but until that time comes
you'll need to walk away

Answer 2

Wonderful!

Answer 3

XD thank you and what you mean only airforce what if i wonna join the marines?

Answer 4

it was good

Answer 5

You can`t join the Marines because its dangerous and i don`t wanna have to worry about you all the time so only the airforce :D

Answer 6

I love it <3

Answer 7

haha its ok ill get her back im going into the marines im enlisted and ship off to bootcamp in june for the summer then i go for my senior year and then i go back for ait

Answer 8

@LyricalDevonne its not much but it was just off the top of my head and @Dustinself42 thats what my mom said lol

Answer 9

@LyricalDevonne thank you and @Dustinself42 see ill be safe lol

Answer 10

Good mom is right and nah bruh i`ll get her back if she goes into the Marines Cause im not letting my best friend get hurt when i could have helped

Answer 11

Love it! Like a lot :)

Answer 12

so i can go if you come with me XD?

Answer 13

thank you @MissIndie and @alesia/bailey

Answer 14

haha please like shes gonna get hurt with meCx

Answer 15

@savannah152426 what you think? its not much

Answer 16

She could and Maybe :P

Answer 17

@LyricalDevonne lol dustin dont know how close we are lol

Answer 18

ya she wont im 6'1 and weigh 225lbs and its all muscle Cx i bench 295lbs

Answer 19

and ive been training for the marines for 6 years

Answer 20

you gonna asnwer me back? @LyricalDevonne

Answer 21

amazing lyrics

Answer 22

thank you @bvblover83014

Answer 23

@Brostep0s hey i want you opion on these lyrics

Answer 24

Work on making it rhyme. People will like it more if it rhymes, it'll make more sense, & it'll sound better too. Work on the spelling. Fix all of these things, & I think you'll get your point across too.

Answer 25

kk thx

Answer 26

just keep writing and itll come to you, but make sure your words speak the truth. if you try to hard it wont make sense and it wont tie together, I learned that from experience.

and I totally realized all of that rhymed o.e

Answer 27

lol your so helpful thank you and im happy i can call you a friend, you know i actully was encouraged by you and a few other peole to star putting song up an here so thank you to all of you

Answer 28

I'm almost finished with my first EP. Counting Stars may release it independently sometime in January. Follow my Twitter @aduncan2016 to follow the countdown. We may release a sample of a song & the track line-up. We start recording this week!! Mixing comes in January.

Answer 29

im leaveing in january but i will when i get back in june

Answer 30

@alesia/bailey here lol

Answer 31

awws <3
xD psshhh..
I knew it was here...
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