Question

Just something I wrote. Along with this music.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WjLJN4XFoWE
Don't get it wrong. I didn't write the music. Only the words. First comment. Like it?

Answer 1

I have fought the best I could
I have lost the battle
I've been beaten
I've been broken deep inside
Now I'm bleeding to death
Blood running down my hands
Is there anyone to help?
I can't live like this anymore
Well, I finally realized the truth
No one cares about me
No one stands up for me
No one wants to be my true friend
No one
Sufferings and pain
Me heart is broken like a puzzle in pieces
There's no way I can put it back together
Tears are running down my eyes
The silent cry. Deep in my heart.
Where no one hears
The Silent scream
breaking the silence now
I close my eyes imagining
Wind blowing through my hair. The cold
#PEACE!

Answer 2

You should get a wattpad.
wattpad.com
You would like it... check it out. i wont explain it.

i like your honesty with how you feel...im sorry that is how you feel though. but its better to face the falicies than pretend they aren't there.

Answer 3

Yes, I know what that is. Thanks:)

Answer 4

@sleepyhead314
show your absalute music artist crushing talent xD

Answer 5

i cant hear it sorry :(
only half my headset works xD

Answer 6

Wowww! Thats great, sorry you feel like that. The best writers or poets are the ones that have experienced something in their life and speak from their hearts. Great job! Keep doing what your doing and you might just get somewhere with your writing. ;)

Answer 7

:) Thanks.

Answer 8

or dont respond to me... it might be great but scince only have my heaset works... i only hear half of it... so nothing sounds good... :( sorry if i upset you somehow :(

Answer 9

Nah, @Jaynator495 I'm not upset. Get a different computer, lel:) Just kidding. If it doesn't work then that's ok.

Answer 10

no i just need a new headset... and i cant help it its my school computer... i hardly ever go ion os with my gaming computer! Lmao

Answer 11

if i did i would be making such laggy latex... i might break os ._. because i wouldnt be able to tell how bad it actually is XD

Answer 12

That... was beautiful ❤

Answer 13

Thanks, @arabpride
Jaynator, I don't know what to tell ya.

Answer 14

tell me to go on my gaming computer and listen to it.. duh xD @YanaSidlinskiy

Answer 15

Ya, do that:)!!

Answer 16

@YanaSidlinskiy I'm here so I guess you need to write a new and happier poem xD
:)

Answer 17

It was just random. Kind of:)

Answer 18

Nice work i'm a piano player been one for um, 2 years so far , but u did great im not a big singer but i have tried ...not good at it but u did great ...!

Answer 19

Thanks! I'm also a piano player, violinist, and a singer. But I just wrote it.

Answer 20

Amazing.

Answer 21

Good Job

Answer 22

osunds good do u sing it or someone else does?

Answer 23

I am pretty sure that Yana saing it :)

Answer 24

cool idk who that is lol

Answer 25

No, I didn't sing it. But honestly opinions of others, I don't sing well. So no. I'm not planning to sing it or let someone hear me sing it. Although I can upload a piece like 1 minute or 2 where I sing a random song. But that won't be until like a week or 2 after next week, if I'm not mistaking. But thanks for all the comments!!