Question

Hey could someone one proof read this please so I can turn it in for my rough draft

Answer 1

A family reunion is where family gathers from wherever they to one spot to visit, have fun, and have a great experience. My family has a family reunion every two years and they have been wonderful and fun no matter where they are and whatever we are doing For the first three reunions was at Disney land because that was the best option for little kids. We would go on that one Dumbo ride for half the day because I guess we got addicted to flying in an elephant. We also used to love the devilish “It’s a small world,” because I loved being in boats on water so, I would plug my ears and ride. The teacups from Alice in wonderland were also a favorite until I got nauseous. The best part of those three reunions was being able to see all of my cousins, having a good time, and doing stupid yet fun things. For the fourth reunion, we stayed at my grandparents’ house with all the other people in our family and we went to the beach, the great mall, mini golf, many restaurants, and went hiking. Also, we never will do another one like that because my aunt’s car window was broken into and her purse was stolen. But, the reunion was all in all very fun, exciting, and a great family experience that I probably won’t have again. For the fifth and sixth reunions we would go down to Las Vegas to a one story gigantic house. These family reunions are the ones I think were the most fun. This gigantic house comes with full out kitchen, dining room, 10 bedrooms, 6 bathrooms, game room, living room, a casita which we call the man cave because all the boys sleep there. The backyard is huge with a tree house with stairs, a trampoline, a pool, and a horse stable. We went to the valley of fire to climb a 500 foot steep red rock, that had petroglyphs, and very cute chipmunks that would only come into my hand. I also got to learn how to drive by driving on a public street and a crazy dirt road. My favorite part by far was Lake Mead we got to go tubing and I popped out my left knee. I got to jump of the side of a two story house boat in to the water which was AWESOME! I also swim a lot and jump off a cliff we found into the water. This custom is the most important because, you get spend time with your family that you don’t get to see very often. When I have kids and grandkids I will do everything in my power to unite them all at a family reunion and have fun.

Answer 2

I know its a lot but, thx for the help

Answer 3

@Bpgrace

Answer 4

What is this for?

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@PyroYolka

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It s for my rough draft

Answer 7

I just need some help with commas

Answer 8

I meant is this for the English 10 exam?

Answer 9

No asking for answers or help on exams is forbidden

Answer 10

and you can get banned forever

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@abram134

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@SolomonZelman

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@DatRandomPumpkin @firelord

Answer 14

Yeeeesss? XD

Answer 15

XD if your feeling like a hero could you help proofread this for medal

Answer 16

Hmm.... Kinda busy with my own thing now...
If you help me with my questions, I'll have a look at this. :D

Answer 17

fine

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@jessicatucker @quickstudent @xo.minnie.xox

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I'm here lol XD

Answer 20

ok if you proof read i will help on big questions when you ask and I have to go and if you proofread I will check on it later

Answer 21

First off: gathers from wherever they to one spot to visit does not make sense. Try: gathers in one spot to visit each other, have fun, and enjoy the experience.

Answer 22

I have to go, but here are some tips:

Try to avoid repeating words. Mix it up a little!

Think about who your targeted audience will be, and write accordingly.

Do your best, and have fun! (Although it actually isn't fun XD)

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@PyroYolka