Question

Can someone help me or give me suggestions on my thesis. I am not sure if my thesis is strong enough D:

Answer 1

We meet again. @lordofpens @~

Answer 2

Can you provide your thesis.

Answer 3

yes please

Answer 4

i will mail. thank you!

Answer 5

i feel like there is a better way to wording the thesis?

Answer 6

The thesis is supposed to be the introduction not the conclusion. Unless your teachers taught you it differently.

Answer 7

i paragraph i gave you is the introduction paragraph? isn't it suppose to be place in the last sentence?

Answer 8

true but in your conclusion you should restate what ylu stated in the essay basically a sum up

Answer 9

Ok.

Answer 10

I sent you something.

Answer 11

okay, thank you :D

Answer 12

You're welcome.