Question

Rewrite the following paragraph to fix errors or improve the writing in the areas of conciseness, variety, tone, slang, coherence, and overall effective sentence construction
The budget is on time. The budget is balanced. The budget is controversial. If we leave it as it has been written, we will have to cut wages, the employees will be pissed off. Somebody better find some revenue to generate or they’ll all be standing in the unemployment line. Selling widgets would be a great way to bring in cold cash we could make them out of used pop cans. We need