Question

Revise the following sentence for word choice, choosing using academic or professionally appropriate words and phrases

After I showed up late for work, I seen that someone trashed the bathrooms

My buddies and I were kicking it at the bowling alley last night when someone got a strike and almost died laughing after.

Answer 1

1.) After I showed up late for work, I saw that someone trashed the bathrooms. [revising the grammar only]

1b.) After arriving late for work, I noticed that someone had made a mess of the bathroom. [revised word choice]



2.) As my friends and I were were enjoying some recreational time together at the bowling alley, we witnessed someone get a strike and he laughed hysterically afterwards. [revised it overall]