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Hey so i really liked it, and i love the message but i just wanted to let you know about something. Racism isnt the act of hating someone because of there skin color. Racism is the acting of hating someone and being intolerant towards someone because of there race. Believe it or not its happened to every race. People are racisist towards whites all the time but white isnt really a race. At least i dont see it as one. Some of the past racism that has happened to others who are not black are, the Irish. This is part of my ansetary and yes theyre are more then just this but this my families history. The irish have been treated poorly in some ways just as bad as the african americans. Speaking of african americans i dont think we should even call them that. I dont think we should call them black. I think we should remember the histories of those who have been wronged but know that it is uncommon in todays world. People should look at them as people as Americans. Thats what they are right? i kept this as short as i could and i can explain my reasoning's more and in detail. I just wanted to let you know that its not just skin color its so much more and many other cultures have been harrassed just as much. Other then my political views i think it was good for a song. Meaning for an actual poem i personally like it to have a little more detail but for a song it has a very good ryhthem to it. This would be a great chorus so you need to add a little more. I think a good idea would be to have peoples stories or perspectives for the verses