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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Lisa stumbled – running -- deeper and deeper into the forest. The scene she just experienced flashed in her mind. Tears streamed down her face -- blurring her vision. She slowed her pace to avoid falling. She came to a clearing and wiped the tears from her eyes. She had to clear her head and focus on surviving her first night out here in the woods. She had a small pack she had stored for a situation like this. It contained a bow and quiver, a long dagger, a torch and matches, and a bedroll attached to the bottom among a few other essentials. Lisa came upon a cave in the clearing but she

OpenStudy (anonymous):

sensed something strange. As she inched towards the cave something finally clicked... smoke. There was the smell of smoke lingering in the air. She drew her dagger and crept ever closer to the entrance. She looked around the edge of the cave and dropped her dagger and the sand-covered floor. Someone leaning against the back corner of the wall.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

dose it create suspense and make you want to keep reading?

OpenStudy (sosa4954):

yeah

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thank you

OpenStudy (anonymous):

its copywrited lol

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