Question

(1) This week is going to be insane, Danesha thought to herself as she got ready for school. (2) With the end of the school year came all sorts of final projects, and every single project was due that Friday. (3) Danesha didn't understand why her teachers liked to assign everything at the same time. (4) After grabbing her lunch and a breakfast bar, the school bus was heard. (5) Danesha flew out the door to catch it. (6) Occupied with all that needed to be done, the front door was accidentally left unlocked.

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Which of these, if any, is the clearest and most effective way to revise sentenc4?

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She heard the school bus grabbing her lunch and a breakfast bar.
The school bus was heard after grabbing her lunch and a breakfast bar.
After grabbing her lunch and a breakfast bar, she heard the school bus.

Answer 1

@quin100

Answer 2

Yea I got that question wrong. It sayed it was sentence 4

Answer 3

aww im so sorry I thought it was one of them. (sorry)

Answer 4

It is ok I can get it back. It lets me answer the wrong ones again.

Answer 5

I feel really bad but its over with. I would say C

Answer 6

Thank you! Don't feel bad it happens. Sometimes I think the test are wrong

Answer 7

haha same here

Answer 8

LOL! :-D

Answer 9

was it right?

Answer 10

Yes

Answer 11

Thank you!

Answer 12

that is it! thank you!

Answer 13

your welcome thanks for the medal

Answer 14

You are welcome

Answer 15

@dumbsearch2

Answer 16

Hi!

Answer 17

Hi! What do you need help with now?

Answer 18

Ok well I need help with not this question but another question I will post it.

Answer 19

After grabbing her lunch and a breakfast bar, she heard the school bus.

Answer 20

that is how to correctly revise to be clear.

Answer 21

The original is not incorrect, just not as direct.

Answer 22

Thank you! I need another question answered though. I will tag you.