Question

Hi, guys!! I wrote a song last night with some background on my ukulele. Let me post the lyrics in chat. :)

Answer 1

It's just another day
You get up
and get ready for school.
But lately
You haven't been yourself.
It seems like anyone
is pretty but you.

But once upon a note
someone said you shine
but let me tell you
you are gorgeous,too
no matter who you are
no matter what the scar.
You are gorgeous
you are gorgeous
you, ya you are gorgeous too.

Ya, you always have
to squeeze into your clothes
why do you always dress
for anyone but you
ya, it drives me crazy
that you could think
that you aren't gorgeous

But once upon a note
someone said you shine
but let me tell you
you are gorgeous, too
no matter who you are
no matter what the scar
you are gorgeous
you are gorgeous
you, ya you are gorgeous, too.

But let me tell you
you are gorgeous too.
no matter who you are
no matter what the scar
no matter where you've gone
or all the things you've done
you, ya you are gorgous.

Answer 2

I hope you likey :)

Answer 3

@Clalgee could you give me some feedback?

Answer 4

I really love it good job

Answer 5

Wow! Thats really good!

Answer 6

Thanks guys. I'm thinking about posting it on youtube. Not sure yet, though.

Answer 7

Wow! This is very beautiful song lyric! This is the exact format I write my music lyrics in! I am looking forward to hearing how the melody goes. Please send me the link!

Answer 8

Thank's everyone for responding and giving me some feedback. I really appreciate that. And for anyone who wanted to hear the melody, I'll try to get it posted when I get the chance. Thank's everyone!!!

Answer 9

this is pretty good wow

Answer 10

cool!

Answer 11

Beautiful girly!

Answer 12

@Destinycholie can you give me some feedback? :)

Answer 13

This is really good I love it