Can someone read my labs and tell me if they are good?
There is so much information. I guess you have to be more specific. People can not read all that information. It is better to mention which parts of your lab you are most concerned about. I believe that would work better.
Could you look at my discussion and conclusions?
I checked your discussion for lab 4. It was good, but as you know I did not do the lab. Therefore I do not know about those numbers which you mentioned in your lab. My suggestion for lab 4 is that try to tweak your writing a little bit and make sure it does not include any major error in your calculations and details. Likewise, in discussion for lab 4, make the ending more confident because you mentioned probably ... and If you use something like thus or therefore, I believe it can show you are much more confident.
If it is necessary tweak your writing a little bit. Overall there were strong labs and you did pretty good job.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it.
No problem.
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