Question

Don't leave me, she said.
If you love someone,
You should be able to love them so much,
That you are willing to let them go, is what any man could have said.
But instead he said,
You are the flower that lives on the surface of the river bank,
The flower that once falls from the tree,
Slowly moves away from me.
At some point you and me will no longer be,
But maybe someday you will come back to me.
I love you my dear, but the end is not near.
My love will go on,
Burning like the sun,
But fading as the eternal coldness of a winter night,
Comes and takes me away.

Answer 1

I love you my dear, but the end is here.

Answer 2

@Tazmaniadevil

Answer 3

@yolo_king335

Answer 4

@wyattp17

Answer 5

@undeadknight26

Answer 6

It looks pretty good :)

Answer 7

aw thanks :)

Answer 8

yes i also think it looks pretty good

Answer 9

thanks.. not many ppl have seen my peoms, i think its finaally time! lol @austin11111 @undeadknight26

Answer 10

its a very good poem

Answer 11

thank you :)

Answer 12

welcome

Answer 13

@thesweetheart3

Answer 14

@Teddyiswatshecallsme

Answer 15

@TexasBoy123

Answer 16

thats good who its that for

Answer 17

Wow... Really good!!!

Answer 18

@thesweetheart3 idk... the stuff just flows out :3 i never really know who's it for lol

Answer 19

@Teddyiswatshecallsme thanks

Answer 20

hey i pm you

Answer 21

very welcome :)

Answer 22

@Clalgee

Answer 23

I really love this ;)

Answer 24

:) thank you :)

Answer 25

Wow. Your poems and stories are so different than many others I have come across. You give off a very different feeling, I'm not sure how to describe it. Your figurative language is beyond amazing and original which is what I love most about your writings! Please, don't stop writing. If anything, keep on writing more :) @cupcakerain

Answer 26

thank you so much @Clalgee i really appreciate ur feedback. I'll make sure to tag you whenever i post any others :)

Answer 27

Please do! I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work! :) @cupcakerain

Answer 28

:) thanks for the support @Clalgee

Answer 29

@strawberryswing
@I_Always_Smiling

Answer 30

Your welcome! I'm happy too! And would you mind sharing your feedback on my question? @cupcakerain

Answer 31

of course! :) just tag me

Answer 32

@YungXxGodXx

Answer 33

hmm O_O WOAH @cupcakerain sound good lol im stalking u xD anyways great job ^-^ better writing than me "There are more fish in the sea..... but nun that i can see........ see fish..... see"

Answer 34

lol, thanks Kev. i appreciate it, and ur poem... its quite interesetin xD @just_one_last_goodbye

Answer 35

i know c; my life is interesting seems like mood swings xD one day people love me for me other day people be using me but who cares I got a gift that i forgive and i move on in my life WARRIORS 4EVER!!!

Answer 36

lol... well then :)

Answer 37

i like it good clarity of expression

Answer 38

thank you @juana02

Answer 39

This is so beautiful!