Question

introduction that includes the thesis statement
PLEASE HELP

Answer 1

@tester97

Answer 2

question

Answer 3

its introduction that includes a thesis statement and i need a paragraph

Answer 4

What I was trying to say earlier (in your former question post) was that in order to write a good essay, you must have a proper introduction. Stemming from that is usually an efficient thesis statement. (Pretty much just a sentence stating your main idea) Those start with "Grabbers" - something that might catch the attention or spark interest in the reader.

http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/introductions/
http://lklivingston.tripod.com/essay/intro.html
http://www.crlsresearchguide.org/17_Writing_Introduction.asp

We can't write the paragraph for you ~~

Answer 5

i know you guys cant write it lol

Answer 6

yeah i am suppost to rite abot the early-river civilization

Answer 7

no the four early-river civilizations

Answer 8

Well I'm assuming you know a little bit about this already?
I'm sure they would not give you an assignment on something that has not been taught.
Be confident! Try to engage the reader immediately or as soon as you put your pen to paper. The links above should help.

Answer 9

Do you have a textbook?

Answer 10

no im in K12 they dont teach me anything i want to go to normal school but i cany my parents dont let me thats how i dont know this

Answer 11

Ah..well considering that you might be in 7th-9th grade, I'm pretty sure you have an online or physical World History textbook or some sort of resource from your teacher/school. Ah..the best thing you can do is conduct an online research or contact k12 about that.

Answer 12

i did and im in 6th grade

Answer 13

and they didnt care they think it is so easy and they dont teach me anything they act like its a peice of cake

Answer 14

Otherwise? I'm not sure if I can be of any more assistance :( There's not much I can do from here. I've written a couple of essays on this and I would try and give you some hints, but I'm not sure if that's considered cheating or not. Try talking to your parents about any issues you're having! Your post was in regards to an "introduction" and I have you some tips and links.
I apologize. Good luck.

Answer 15

its not cheating please help me i dont wanna lose 15% of my grade

Answer 16

I could, however, give you a link that contains information about these civilizations. Hopefully that helps (:
http://www.rivervalleycivilizations.com/

Please do some further research, though.
And like I said earlier, I'm not sure what you expect me to do??

Answer 17

okay