Here's another one, "Have You Ever" by Cupcakerain :3 Have you ever dreamt? Have you ever thought? Have you ever known? Have you ever seen? Have you ever dazed? Have you ever held? Have you ever thought of the effect? Out of all these questions put me in the end, this is what I think whenever I talk. I love him, but the last question is: Have you ever loved...me?
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u should also sleep at night cup.lol.btw awesome
exactly same question i ask myself, i can relate, alot, nice work
haha @danish071996 i do sleep xD this is my life tho
@Crissy15 yeah...i got sis-zoned lol sooo xD
lol.ok.
jaja ok, well if you can read my mind i guess whatever you write, is what I feel like everyday
jaaajaaa. dale, well i'll make sure to tag you :)
@bibby
u like poems dont u
it's my life @skate-4-life270
@Jaxor9090
Awesome
i nevver showed my work to any one till a few months back, i didnt think people would like it :P lol
thanks :)
@Clalgee
nice
thanks :)
Aww this is very cute! As if you were writing a love poem to the one you love. One thing I would change is the last line. Instead of , "Have you ever loved... me?" I would switch it to , "Have you ever... loved me?". It's a very minor problem, although if you are reading it out loud, it would make a huge difference in how your poem sounds. It will give it an even more dramatic ending than it already is. I really do love this saying- Out of all these questions put me in the end, this is what I think whenever I talk. It give the impression that whenever she is talking to the one she loves, there is one question that is always in the back of her mind. It would never go away and would always be a bothersome to her. @cupcakerain Once again, great job on the poem! I always love reading them! @cupcakerain
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to tag you twice.
:) thank you sooooo sooo much @Clalgee i really appreciate it :)
Your very welcome! I'm glad I could help you! Please tag me whenever you put a poem up! Id love to read them! @cupcakerain
I sure will :)
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