Question

Is this a good 12 line nature poem?

the trees towered over me
as I looked to the mountain top
this place helps me feel free
the breeze that doesn't seem to stop

I can hear water in the distance
where the fish roam the stream
here they have a timeless existence
this place feels like a dream

the mountain side is where I belong
the forest feels like my home
the sound of the winds song
and the valley that is mine to roam

Answer 1

yes it is it beautiful

Answer 2

I love it

Answer 3

thank you two

Answer 4

You NEED to add periods and comas.

Answer 5

no problem

Answer 6

other than that is good.

Answer 7

I know, its just a draft but thank you

Answer 8

It's beautiful i can just imagine it already

Answer 9

thank you so much

Answer 10

your welcome keep on writing i love nature