Question

I wrote a song I hope you guys like it .
@Librarian @this_emo_chic1023 @MAli13chineta @kristyn-whitaker @Mesopretty

Answer 1

I was supposed to be
at the bottom of the sea
for eternity
drowned by the person
who swore that she loved me
...left me fro dead
so no one could love me
along you came
one lonely day ...just to safe me
but you should have left me
where you found me
at the bottom of the sea
so soon in our time
I hurt you one
to many times
and the thought of it
makes me cry
every time I sleep
i hope to die

Answer 2

there's more hold on

Answer 3

kissing you is the one thing
I don't regret
but there's times where
I wish we never met
I don't deserve anything as perfect
as you
they say life is painful
that's true
I once kissed kissed death
when I kissed you

Answer 4

yea, that's all

Answer 5

wow, um dude that's freakin amazing, it's awesome..your good, like.... really good. keep it up and u'll get discovered....never give up <3 <3

Answer 6

wow that was amazing <3

Answer 7

"Left me fro dead" is my favorite line. Hands down.

Answer 8

wow that's amazing

Answer 9

yea, sorry about the" fro" thing I was typing fast so no one would be like where's it at ?

Answer 10

its ok it was still amazing

Answer 11

that was pretty good keep up the good work

Answer 12

You should keep the "fro." I found it quite captivating. :D

Answer 13

i really like it ^-^

Answer 14

that 's awesome :)

Answer 15

This is literally perfect, you should do something with it on a higher level, maybe make a video and try to youtube likes and stuff.. this could be big!!!

Answer 16

good job bro goood job