Litch King its a rap made by me hope u all enjoy
@tomorrow @FireWolfSpirit @SyedMohammed98 @pooja195
oh shoot oops
what?
wait let me re attach the file i messed up
the songs not playing my fail
nice i caught a few mistakes though lol. its great though. good voice
it played for her
ok theres the flawless versio all u have to do is click slide show
it sounded like you were trying to write poetry just tbh it didnt sound like a song...
i clicked the messed up version
its rap its music so people say
but i guess haters gonna hate
you need to have a specific melody and vibe to the song or else it wont go well and your flow isnt flowing if you know what i mean, its kind of just there.
i havent done that yet ok
i just started
this is like my alpha version wait for my beta
haters gonna hate? CX oh thats funny look at my "freestyle" from 2 days ago, i wrote that in 5 mins and i have 30 medals in one day lmao
just cuz im asain huh?
my post is only 2 under yours right now
what ever
im half black half korean so no
just leave me alone and quit it
im just saying that you should post it in writing because thats not music what so ever.... it was like a failed poetry, so dont say im a hater just cuz i hate your song, Cx
u are a hater u know what
i should of never posted any thing
close the question then
this always happens to my creations
then that says alot...
theres always that jerk like u and every one goes along with
fck you LyricalDevonne
that jerk that everyone goes along with? Cx i dont need other peoples help i know how to write music lmao and one person taking their medal away doesnt make a difference i have 230 other ones from the music section and me writing music Cx
Lyrical he didnt post this for u to judge and brag about ur 'freestyle' so leave him alone.
and medals are not everything. js
no but he did post it for critism, if he didnt then he needs not to post because thats the only way we are allowed to post it and when i give him feed back his response shouldnt be haters gonna hate cuz god knows im not hating on this crap @tomorrow
and medals may not be everything but the 40 some people that said my music was GOOD do. so maybe he should actually take advice from someone that knows what they are doing and not shut down right away...
actully he posted it for his fans, you know, people with an actual taste in music
unlike you whom only likes songs about rape and gettin high
his 66 fans? lol and if you havent realized you arent allowed to just post their are rules you can only post original music if you are asking for feedback or its educational...
and just cuz im a black male and i rap does not constitute you saying that i write about that... i tried to give him feedback and it wasnt rude he was the one to start being rude... and i write love songs just as an fyi lmao
you call "thats not music what so ever.... it was like a failed poetry" not being rude?
you call "haters gonna hate? CX oh thats funny look at my "freestyle" from 2 days ago, i wrote that in 5 mins and i have 30 medals in one day lmao" not being rude
i said that AFTER he was rude like i said "he was the one being rude first" if your going to try and correct me or make me look bad at least read the whole comment so you dont look bad in the process
he said it wasent finished but haters gonna hate and you said "haters gonna hate? CX oh thats funny look at my "freestyle" from 2 days ago, i wrote that in 5 mins and i have 30 medals in one day lmao"
ya so if i did that im obviously not a hater, you only hate on someone who you think is better than you... and he just called me a hater, so you think thats not rude?? this was what i said before he called me a hater "it sounded like you were trying to write poetry just tbh it didnt sound like a song..." "you need to have a specific melody and vibe to the song or else it wont go well and your flow isnt flowing if you know what i mean, its kind of just there.
you said 'it sounded like you were trying to write poetry just tbh it didnt sound like a song..." and if you read what he put before that "...its a rap ..." you would have known it wasn't a song
hat-er: a negative or critical person.
oh god did you just basically say if you right rap, your not writing a songCx so that means look at me now is a rap not a song? no rap is a style of music a style of writing a SONG lol wowwwww
hat-er: a person who greatly dislikes a specified person or thing.
rap: a type of popular music of US origin in which words are recited rapidly typically over a prerecorded, electronic instrumental backing.
thats the formal definition of hater, wast that a formal scentence?
hat-er: informal a negative or critical person. "she found it difficult to cope with the haters"
are you dumb you just contradicted yourselfCx you said writing rap isnt righting a song... lmao now you say its a type of music
music isnt a song idiot
if you write music, your developing a song god your dumb
Music: vocal or instrumental sounds (or both) combined in such a way as to produce beauty of form, harmony, and expression of emotion.
how is that dumb is that is the exact definition?
stop fighting
ok but when you WRITE music, your WRITING a song, when it all comes together it FORMS a song
and on the hater part if you really wanna get on logistics the word thats completely unformal and used the most commonly is more like this A person that simply cannot be happy for another person's success. So rather than be happy they make a point of exposing a flaw in that person. Hating, the result of being a hater, is not exactly jealousy. The hater doesnt really want to be the person he or she hates, rather the hater wants to knock somelse down a notch. Susan: You know, Kevin from accounting is doing very well. He just bought a house in a very nice part of town. Jane (hater): If he is doing so well why does he drive that '89 Taurus?
Beethoven didn't write songs he wrote music. when have you ever heard someone sayd beethoven's song...?
look i see the light in the darkness thats whats my belive and all my life people have hated on my work and music came before the song
when the say they like the song fur elise lmao or maybe 5th symphony
u know what lyrical im sorry if a bothered u
im sorry if being me bothers u but u must deal with it alright?
that isnt just me righting about somthing random that has a meaning hidden in it
i have learned one thing and thats u will learn to accept others when u learn to accept your self that is what i have learned
no idec tbh i just dont want you thinking im a hater i just gave you feed back then you called me that... i obviously know what i do seeing how i run this section basically with me, justnick, and @Tazmaniadevil so just take advice next time
Being hated is something ive delt with too much. i have been hated my whole life... for my religion... for my grades... for my morals... and what could I do? i was told to drive it out but i let it in... let it consume me.
that song is about me about me accepting what and who i am
so your a linch king that destroys people? lol
im the litch because im not the best looking
In saying that i would like to... apologize.... for my actions and words
i have anger inside of me and it needs controling thats my beast
i loose my mind and control when im angry and trust me u didnt make me mad u made me sad u touched my heart deep inside the most remote area
oh guys tbh im not worked up im not even mad im just killing time before i go livestream, but its not a problem my thing is @DarkMoonZ if you really want to become a writer and be good just listen to peoples advice and pay attention, thats what i did, so ya dont worry im not trippin
i take advice from those who dont shine from people i trust
i see ya, i would express that bye writing a song in the format, verse1 chorus verse2 chorus verse3 outro
who dont shine?
It's just another form of bulling when you speak against an opinion someone has the god-given right to say and I am, may I say, appalled and livid at the behavior show here. Compliments and complaints are so widely unaccepted nowadays that if you speak you are hated so you don't speak, then you are hated for not speaking.But if Someone doesn't act nobody will and I'm choosing to be that someone even if it kills me.. I must admit that i'd cry myself to sleep every night because i was bullied.
dont worry about that but u shine so thanks for the advice but i have my ways and my ways will be accepted
have a nice day liyric
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