Question

If I put my paper in here that I have to have done by tomorrow. Would someone pure edit?

Answer 1

or help me pure edit, and just fix my mistakes so I can get a good grade on it.

Answer 2

I might be able to. What grade is this for and do you have a sort of rubric?

Answer 3

Its for 9th grade english.
Theres no rubric on the internet for it though. she gave it to us on paper. but i have the paper all written and everything.

Answer 4

would you like me to share it?

Answer 5

I can definitely help you with that. Is it for a specific book, analyzing, comparison, etc?

Answer 6

I'm doing the change in Sierra Leone Culture.
Its from the Book A long Way Gone memoirs of a Boy Soilder.

Answer 7

Hmm, I haven't ever read A Long Way Gone so I won't be able to help you as much as you need but I can simply edit grammar choice, sentence structure, etc.

Answer 8

ok I'll get the paper.

Answer 9

Okay. c:

Answer 10

https://docs.google.com/a/students.elkhorn.k12.wi.us/document/d/1uAuqFMQ2TTDevPMYCfi2scKgaTcxWI0BpGMxqcP6x2c/edit

Answer 11

I'm noticing by just scanning that your MLA seems to be a bit off. How specific does it say you have to be on your rubric in regards to citations and the like?

Answer 12

she just wants us to give what page number we got some of our stuff from the book.. we don't really use anything else.

Answer 13

What about using first person?

Answer 14

I believe were only suppose to use 3rd person.

Answer 15

Do you need a thesis as well?

Answer 16

no I don't believe so.

Answer 17

brb

Answer 18

back.

Answer 19

To start off with, after reading your paper, I think you should go through and eliminate any use of 'I' or 'you.' Let me know when you have done that or if you need any help. :)

Answer 20

you should start off with an interesting question to hook the readers? for example: would you image if ..(blah...blah) (explain what happened i haven't read the story)...how would you react? well, this is exactly what happened to(and say the name ).. and i would strongly suggest for you to take off the sentence "in this paper..." you should have that sentence we already know that the paper is going to talk about those things.. just start off with the story... there's to many i thinks.. try to fix it up a little not making it so straight on forward.. so serious i know its about something tragic but try to not be so dull (boring) sorry had to say it... but overall its good just fix those things..

Answer 21

and try to use descriptive words..

Answer 22

Ok I will fix that in just a second thanks :)

Answer 23

In the future, this site can help. It does grammar checks, spelling and much more, plus, you don't have to worry about it stealing your paper, it's completely confidential. http://www.paperrater.com/free_paper_grader

Answer 24

ok thanks!!