Your friend's paper contains great word choices to communicate the urgency of the issue she's writing about, which is why her audience should support funding to save the polar bear. You notice that her introduction contains only her thesis statement. Even though the thesis is strong, what advice should you NOT give her?

A. Include a lead-in to get the interest of the reader in your introduction.
B. Rewrite your introduction so that you have some background information.
C. Write an overview of what the paper will cover.
D. Your introduction needs a topic sentence.

Question

Your friend's paper contains great word choices to communicate the urgency of the issue she's writing about, which is why her audience should support funding to save the polar bear. You notice that her introduction contains only her thesis statement. Even though the thesis is strong, what advice should you NOT give her?  


 A. Include a lead-in to get the interest of the reader in your introduction. 
 B. Rewrite your introduction so that you have some background information. 
 C. Write an overview of what the paper will cover.  
 D. Your introduction needs a topic sentence.

king.void. · Answer

Your answer might be "D" I may be wrong tho..

anonymous · Answer

you was right