Question

does this sentence make sense with the word epitomized? Or is there a better word?

Answer 1

it does sense

Answer 2

for sure? I feel like it's not clear...second opinion? @SuperflyTyGuy

Answer 3

Change "pertinent to living" to "a pertinent lifestyle".

which had become a pertinent lifestyle to white people.

Answer 4

Otherwise it is great!

Answer 5

thank yo so much :)

Answer 6

Any time!

Answer 7

You should probably take out acceptable. It's redundant.

You know that pertinent and acceptable are similar.

It's almost like saying "He giggled, laughed, and cracked up at my joke."

See what I'm sayin

Answer 8

yes i do! thank you so much!

Answer 9

You're welcome!!! ;)