Can someone proof read this for me and just make sure it flows together?

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Acid Rain-An informative essay in paragraph form
   Acid rain is  a rain or any other form of precipitation that is usually acidic.Acid is any liquid substance with a Ph 6 or lower.Acid rain forms from pollutants released into the air/atmosphere.The erosion process in Acidic rain is chemical based  sulphur dioxide and nitrogen oxides.Some pollutants in acid rain includes fossil fuel and car emissions .Three problems it can cause one acid rain can also ruin buildings because the acid eats into metal and stone , second the water we drink from taps can be contaminated by acid rain-which can damage the brain , and lastly some of the life in the lake such as fish and plants may end up dying because they cannot survive in acidic lakes.We can prevent acid rain and the damages it causes by riding bikes ,not smoking,switching to an electric car ,planting more trees, and recycling.
      Some areas having a problem with acid rain includes New York,    Canada, and  Europe.They are having problems with acid rain due to the large amounts of pollutants released into the air, and the wind patterns also causes these problems with acid rain in these areas..   
      North east America, with high populations with growing cities, little plant growth and commercial auto industries . This area has higher levels of of acidic rain ,smog,and unhealthy air due to the large quantities of emission released into the atmosphere/air.This area could try and rely on more on electrically powered objects instead of gas releasing objects that release toxins to try and reduce acid rain in this area.

anonymous · Answer

its good enough

anonymous · Answer

It fine.

anonymous · Answer

It flows pretty well, one thing that I've learned being in honors college English as a 10 th grader is to not overly repeat one main word. In this case, your word would be acid. Try and use a description of acid rain instead of just calling it "acid rain" for example, Instead of saying "acid rain is a rain or any type of precipitation that's usually acidic." You could say something like "THIS TYPE of rain or any type of precipitation like it, usually has high concentrations of acid.