Question

Some more songs I wrote, feedback please

Answer 1

Numb

so many feelings I hide inside
my mind tries to protect me
parts of the past it hides
I cant feel, don’t know what’s on my mind
I feel like a ghost
I’m so numb inside

My blood is rushing
Thoughts are flowing
Can’t feel a thing
Can I at least feel my own pain?
Some emotion to know I’m alive
Reach my hand
I wanna revive
Save me from the coldness inside

Maybe if I see the blood
Flowing down my skin
I’ll feel alive
Reminded that I still live
I don’t know where I am
Walking down this broken road again_

I wanna feel…
I want to feel something
Let it be love
Let it be pain
Sometimes it even hurts to breathe
Take my breathe away from me
This awful misery

My blood is rushing
Thoughts are flowing
Can’t feel a thing
Can I at least feel my own pain?
Some emotion to know I’m alive
Reach my hand
I wanna revive
Save me from the coldness
Save me from the coldness inside

It’s a scary place
So dark and empty
Don’t wanna hang on
But I can’t let go
What do I do?
There’s so much pain
Is there too much to lose
I want to feel
But will it be too much to take
Will I throw it all away?

I’m stuck between numb and pain
All the pellet we go through just too even breathe
All of it is too much to take
So where do I go from here
To face the truth
Or shut it out
What do I have to lose?
I guess I’ll let the blade choose
What do I have to lose?

I’m so lost inside
Left in the dark
I just want to revive
Alone and in pain
Easy to fake a smile
Because my true emotions don’t get in the way
But I don’t wanna live that way

My blood is dripping
Thoughts are leaving
Pain is what I’m now truly feeling
Slowly drifting
No longer living
I made up my mind
You didn’t revive me
The coldness is no longer inside me
Now my whole body is stiff cold
Such an awful misery
Bring me back to life.

Answer 2

that is really @alesia/bailey

Answer 3

I like it. Nicely done

Answer 4

so deep!

Answer 5

I love it Deep but Beautiful!!!

Answer 6

Very beautiful piece, I like the fact that it is not completely repetitive. You're talented.

Answer 7

thank you so much ^-^

Answer 8

It is really nice...i like it :) <3

Answer 9

Good job :)

Answer 10

thank you <3

Answer 11

You're welcome c:

Answer 12

You should write more!

Answer 13

i've written a bunch of songs, and posted them on here but you had to scroll down so much i decided to make a new one

Answer 14

wow, that was pretty amazing now that I've seen this one I wish could've read your other songs but, yea awes

Answer 15

@alesia/bailey do you also sing

Answer 16

yes i do.

^^

Answer 17

^^ i wish. :P

Answer 18

gtg

Answer 19

it is a little depressing. What tune is it too?

Answer 20

I would love to hear u sing. but really ur good cant wait for more!

Answer 21

Love it ^-^

Answer 22

No, put down the knives
You don’t need to self harm
Together we will fight
Don’t let them get the best of you
Keep your head held high
You’ve hurt too much
I think you’ve had enough
All you need to do is take a step forward
Think of you
Do what you need to do
Don’t hold back
Don’t be a martyr
its your life in the end
Your consequences
Don’t give a fluttering damn about them
Be the survivor not the victim
You don’t need the ones who choose not to be by your side
I understand
And its okay to cry
Its okay to be mad
To lose your way to the light
But don’t look back
Its all in the past
Don’t think “what if”
You cant erase the facts
Patch up the scars
That make you who you are
And if you don’t like it
Then take a turn and do something good in your life
Or live in the dark
Its not their choice, but its yours
Make a call or choose to lose it all
Life is never easy
But you gotta keep moving on
So will you give in when you start to fall?
Don’t let the nightmares get the best of you this time
Don’t add more pain and trauma to what you have
You only get one chance so make it last
The only thing in your way is your own hate
You are the one too choose your own fate
So what are you gonna do
If in the end all you have is you
All you have is you
Why do you choose this path
Is this path your very last
Broken road
Left in the dark
Completely lost
Forgot who you are
To blind from pain
What will your pain regain
Emptiness
There is no trust to gain
Where will you go
Will you go down that broken road
Where will you go
So alone
On your own
when in the end
you're on your own

Answer 23

hey nice you should set your goal as an artist and go do what you like and bring these songs to life good job bailey

Answer 24

the cool

Answer 25

that is my goal, that's why I write. <3

Answer 26

you might just become successful @alesia/bailey

Answer 27

:)
that means a lot.
i'm working on it.

Answer 28

:)

Answer 29

I believe in you @alesia/bailey

Answer 30

Awesome <33

Answer 31

Wish i could hear you singing it. Really enjoyed it.

Answer 32

I don't know how too.
I wrote it, but I don't know how I want to sing it..
and then actually recording it and getting it on here...

Answer 33

your pretty good :)

Answer 34

^5

Answer 35

??? @ariel52599

Answer 36

still would love to hear it though @alesia/bailey

Answer 37

really good

Answer 38

it awesome.

Answer 39

^5 (a.k.a high five)

Answer 40

oh lol :P thanks

Answer 41

its good.keep it up.

Answer 42

question:do you have more songs...their still good

Answer 43

i have a quite a few songs, I posted them on here but I could close this question and just post all of my songs at once, if you want me too.

Answer 44

sure