Question

i need help writing an original song can anyone help

Answer 1

Write when you know how you feel. If your sad write how you feel and make it your own, then add a beat or flow and make it rhyme. It works the same way with however you feel.

Answer 2

this is what I have so far


Oh no my heart just skipped a beat
Can it be he just swept me off my feet
Nothing in this world could compare
To the love that me and him share
He’s my Romeo I’m is Juliet
We fit together, No one compares to that
I never thought that I could fall in love before

Answer 3

I could give you a few lines if you'd like. I write songs like this all the time so it might help.

Answer 4

ok

Answer 5

i think i might be able to help

Answer 6

I don't want to feel like this anymore,
just gonna tell him how i feel,
but i don't have a heart of steel,
i'll melt in his arms and
he'll pull the stings of my heart

Answer 7

the way he looks at me the way he smiles at me notthing give my heart pain i want stay this forever in his arms he loves me i love him we better together forever and forever we stand here today as couple peope in love but we will never never never stop loving each other?

Answer 8

i meant be

Answer 9

l like both of them

Answer 10

mix them

Answer 11

wait

Answer 12

Oh no my heart just skipped a beat
Can it be he just swept me off my feet
Nothing in this world could compare
To the love that me and him share
He’s my Romeo I’m is Juliet
We fit together, No one compares to that
I never thought that I could fall in love before
I don't want to feel like this anymore,
just gonna tell him how i feel,
but i don't have a heart of steel,
i'll melt in his arms and
he'll pull the stings of my heartthe way he looks at me the way he smiles at me notthing give my heart pain i want stay this forever in his arms he loves me i love him we better together forever and forever we stand here today as couple peope in love but we will never never never stop loving each other?

Answer 13

what you thinl?

Answer 14

I really like it

Answer 15

:D

Answer 16

hold on im going to close then get a new one

Answer 17

oaky