Question

write a paragraph on, alone at a beach

Answer 1

I would say, try imagining being there. Alone on a beach. That might help ya

Answer 2

i would write it.... but actually i want it in a better way.. so plzz if can help..

Answer 3

@lol21

Answer 4

I i were alone on a beach. I'de have an unlimited amount of twinkies, beer and anything else I could gorge myself on, in hopes that I could one day be the next BIGGEST loser. Then I would do exactly as this chisck would do in this link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bek1y2uiQGA

Answer 5

sorry. I had to include humor

Answer 6

im here lol

Answer 7

okay so u need help writing a paragraph on being alone on an island?

Answer 8

yaa or in a beach

Answer 9

okay so do you have any ideas?

Answer 10

actually i feel they are stupid

Answer 11

i want it to be humorous, adventurous, a bit scary kind of.....

Answer 12

somethng interesting

Answer 13

That's a great start. to be able to say exactly how u want it to appeal to the readers. That's good. Now do you know what u want ur character to be like?

Answer 14

Also, is this a simple story or a persuasive essay ?

Answer 15

any1.. any how 2 be cool....

Answer 16

its actually both, evn a kind of essay n evn simple story 2 be dictated

Answer 17

okay so lets see....let's start with the beginning. What is your idea for getting your character on the beach or island?

Answer 18

idk... plzz u start n u end... i really dont hav any idea

Answer 19

how 2 go on

Answer 20

okay lets see. You could say that your character was on a ship or boat and a storm struck and the character ends up on a beach.

Answer 21

ok.... thn...

Answer 22

then maybe your character learns to fend for themselves. Thats where u can make it funny. like you character climbs trees to get frruit and keeps falling. IDK. You can add the funny stuff in yourself.

Answer 23

ok....

Answer 24

okay now do u have any ideas?

Answer 25

or maybe u can even add a little twist. For example, a group of friends can be on the island. This will give u more material and u can write a lot more

Answer 26

what about this one....

"All alone on the beach, all alone in the world"

I take a walk along the beach all alone. The sun is about to rise so I sit upon the sand. My feet play with the sand, it goes between my toes. The water rises to my feet as the sun begins to rise. My eyes are blinded by the sun. I sit alone there watching a beautiful sunrise, the air so pure and clean, the sky so bright and clear. I put my chin upon my knees and being to cry. All alone on the beach, all alone in the world. I sit and weep at the beach all day. The sun is about to set, I lay upon the beach and watch it fall to the water. I see red, yellow, pink, blue, and purple. Clouds are around the sun in a layer like pattern. I am laying there until the moon is my light. I see the twinkle of the first star, I make a wish upon it. I sit up again and give myself a hug and begin to cry. All alone on the beach, all alone in the world. There is a slight whisper I hear. A whisper upon the wind, it says "You are not alone." Upon hearing the whisper a hand touches my shoulder, I look back and there you are.

Answer 27

no... but i feel it should hav a happy ending... i hope u understand

Answer 28

or have a look here...

http://www.exampleessays.com/viewpaper/85796.html

Answer 29

@paki
Even I and @ScarlettGrace<3 can cut and paste essays. Please let us help her get her own ideas

Answer 30

i have provided the link too... @MaimiGirl

Answer 31

ok its gud.. somethng simpler could be more better

Answer 32

You will develop a much strong essay if u start with the ideas stated by me and @ScarlettGrace<3

Answer 33

thnx.. for help guys..

Answer 34

np :)

Answer 35

Funny cause i once wrote a story where the characters get stranded on an island. However it's way too long to be a paragraph :D good luck @bhumi273