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OpenStudy (urkhada):

I need to edit my essay. It is about 647 words but I have to make it 500 words.. If you are willing to helpme.. I will fan and give you medal..

OpenStudy (triciaal):

suggest take out all extra words you don't need look at some phrases -- is there a more concise way to say the same thing next more choice of words for example if this was a regular story and you wanted to say the small car had a difficult time to go up the the steep hill you could just say

OpenStudy (triciaal):

it was a precipitous journey

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