the following sentence or group of sentences contains either fragments or run-ons. Correct them. There is more than one possible acceptable way to correct them.

Candy bars are like soft drinks. Lots of sugar and no nutrition.

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the following sentence or group of sentences contains either fragments or run-ons. Correct them. There is more than one possible acceptable way to correct them.

Candy bars are like soft drinks. Lots of sugar and no nutrition.

surryyy · Answer

Candy bars are like soft drinks, they contain lots of sugar and no nutrition.

is that correct ^^

jademc01 · Answer

If you change the comma to a semicolon ( ; ) it will be perfect!

surryyy · Answer

ok Ty

jademc01 · Answer

Or you can put a period after drinks, and then make the second part a new sentence--and very welcome :-).