Question

New song im making:
If I can't be your superman then girl no one can cause girl i love you all the way, yes all day every day i think about u i just can't get your beutiful self out of my mind. You drive me crazy oh yes you do baby.
Chorus:
I love you girl oh yes i do i just cant stop thinkin about u. I love you girl oh yes i do i just can't stop thinkin about u.

oh yes you drive me crazy just right out of my mind oh yes your so beutiful, must be a devil in disguise, but i let u know i dont care cuz i girl i love ur beutiful hair haha oh yes i do really love u just to tell u now.
Chorus:
I love you girl oh yes i do i just cant stop thinkin about u. I love you girl oh yes i do i just cant stop thinkin about u.

Baby don't u see what we could beeeeee, girl i know you see too just me and you together forever.i could be u superman u could be my supergirl, this so true girl dont you know. i love you forever and ever and ever baby. me and u both know its for sure that u are perfect girl yeah...
Chorus:
I love you girl oh yes i do i just cant stop thinkin about u. I love you girl oh yes i do i just cant stop thinkin about u.

Girl... dont u know i treat u right every day and night. we go out hit it up yes we get it up in the club baby dont u know every night and day i do it just for you. the voices inside of my head tell me ur the perfect one. so i get down on one knee and i say... hun... will u marry me.....
Thats all guys tell me what u think...

Answer 1

~Sings along and stats dancing~

Answer 2

I like it ^_^ Good Job!

Answer 3

thx

Answer 4

got some more

Answer 5

by the way i know i spelled beautiful wrong

Answer 6

@NathanHill1089

Answer 7

NICEEEEE BRUHHH

Answer 8

thx man

Answer 9

lol @DiamondBear3299 spelling "beautiful" wrong is a common mistake

Answer 10

yeah ik but people like to correct it and im like ik ik

Answer 11

what u think nate

Answer 12

@bohotness @cierra.whisper @AmazingApples00 @CallMeKiki @cupcakerain

Answer 13

It's ubber sweet hun

Answer 14

its pretty good

Answer 15

thank you i do actually try on these lol

Answer 16

thx man

Answer 17

Awww! this is amazing!:)

Answer 18

i more into this kinda raps but i do others to. i also do hip hop dancing i write love songs and and i dj

Answer 19

Love it c:

Answer 20

thx kiki

Answer 21

@AmazingApples00

Answer 22

The hippee can sing but cant rap impressive

Answer 23

wow thx lol

Answer 24

@rebeka

Answer 25

that really good

Answer 26

thx

Answer 27

@Werewolfprincess

Answer 28

@ilovewolf

Answer 29

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww @DiamondBear3299

Answer 30

@ilovewolf

Answer 31

@jordanloveangel

Answer 32

its nice