Question

hey can somebody read my short story for grammar class please, and tell me if its fine!???????!?!?!?!?! please!!!!

Answer 1

sorry for so much bothering

Answer 2

maybe a little more detail on the fight in the beginning to catch attention. and throughout the story i feel as though it is a little brief but very good story over all

Answer 3

thanks

Answer 4

so like what can i put for details in the fight? @chrisk123

Answer 5

what are Landon and Jerry relationship and why are they fighting.

Answer 6

because it said they fight everynight maybe about the past of his mom dying

Answer 7

are they brothers friends? and you might want to mention the mom dying thing