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can someone read this for me and help me correct it? ---->It has been said that people who set goals are more likely to accomplish them; those that do not set goals or know what it is they’d like to accomplish are far less likely to succeed. It is not a bad thing to not know or to have any ideas in mind; this process takes time and quite a lot of thought. To accomplish what you want most in life, whether they are big or small, few or many, serious or the not so serious, they are all attainable with the setting of goals and the mind-set of accomplishing those goals.
Although I have many goals

Answer 1

Although I have many goals I would like to share with you, I have picked two goals to talk about: two long term goals and two short term goals. I knew I have always wanted to become a nurse working in a hospital where I would be taking care of patients. It’s been my calling for a very long time and I want nothing more than to accomplish this. The first thing I need to do to make sure I can accomplish this is to make a plan; by breaking this goal up into smaller goals it will ultimately bring me to my nursing career. Another long term goal of mine is to live on an all plant based diet. Minimizing my intake of animal based foods will allow me to get closer to what I believe is a fit and healthy lifestyle.
A short term goal is anything that can be accomplished in as long as twelve months. A short term goal I want to accomplish is to pass my spring classes so that I may be eligible to partake in the Chaffey nursing program. I will be that much closer to becoming a nursing student. Another short term goal of mine is to become more active and fit. I can accomplish this by setting a few hours aside a week by working out. These short term goals are what will push me to the bigger picture of my long term goals. It will be tough at times but thinking of how rewarding the process is will be the best accomplishment. So whether we set long term or short term goals, we can all accomplish them with some perseverance, confidence, and the can do attitude.

Answer 2

I have modified your essay for parallelism's sake.

It has been said that people who set goals are more likely to accomplish them; those that do not set goals or know what it is they'd like to accomplish are far less likely to succeed. It is not a bad thing to not know or to not have any ideas in mind. This process takes time and requires quite a lot of thought. To accomplish what you want most in life, whether they are big or small, few or many, and serious or not, they are all attainable by setting goals and setting a mindset to accomplishing those goals. Although I have many goals I would like to share with you, I have picked four goals, two long-term goals and two short-term goals, to talk about. So let us talk about the long-term goals i wish to accomplish first. I knew I have always wanted to become a nurse working in a hospital, where I would be taking care of patients. It has been my calling for a very long time, and I want nothing more than to accomplish this. The first thing I need to do to make sure I can accomplish this is to make a plan, that is, by breaking this goal up into smaller goals that will ultimately bring me to my nursing career. Second, I want to live on an all plant-based diet. Minimizing my intake of animal-based foods will allow me to get closer to what I believe is a fit and a healthy lifestyle. Now, a short-term goal is anything that can be accomplished within 12 months. The first short-term goal I want to accomplish is to pass my spring classes so that I can be eligible to partake in the Chaffey nursing program. I will then be that much closer in becoming a nursing student. The other short-term goal of mine is to become more active and fit. I can accomplish this by setting aside a few hours a week by working out. These short-term goals are what will push me to the bigger picture of my long-term goals. It will be tough at times, but thinking of how rewarding the process is will be the best accomplishment. So, whether we set long-term or short-term goals, we can all accomplish them with some perseverance, confidence, and the "can do" attitude.

Answer 3

oh my goodness thank you so so much! !!!!!

Answer 4

I have made some typo fixes and edits.

It has been said that people who set goals are more likely to accomplish them; those that do not set goals or know what it is they would like to accomplish are far less likely to succeed. It is not a bad thing to not know or to not have any ideas in mind. This process takes time and requires quite a lot of thought. To accomplish what you want most in life, whether they are big or small, few or many, and serious or not, they are all attainable by setting goals and setting a mindset to accomplishing those goals. Although I have many goals I would like to share with you, I have picked four goals, two long-term goals and two short-term goals, to share with you. My first long-term goal I want to accomplish is to become a nurse. I have always wanted to become a nurse, working in a hospital, where I would be taking care of patients. It has been my calling for a very long time, and I want nothing more than to accomplish this. To assist me in achieving this goal, I need to make a plan that will break up my long term goal into smaller achievable goals that when completed, will ultimately bring me to a nursing career. My second long term goal is to live on an all plant-based diet. Minimizing my intake of animal-based foods will allow me to get closer to what I believe is a fit and a healthy lifestyle. Now, a short-term goal is anything that can be accomplished within 12 months. My first short-term goal I want to accomplish is to pass my spring classes, so I can be eligible to enroll in the Chaffey nursing program. I will then be that much closer to becoming a nursing student. My last short-term goal is to become more active and fit. I can accomplish this by setting aside a few hours a week to work out. These short-term goals will assist me in reaching my long term goals by improving my focus, my eligibility for selection into a nursing program, and my mental and physical healthy. It will be tough at times, but thinking of how rewarding the process is will be the best accomplishment. So, whether we set long-term or short-term goals, we can all accomplish them with some perseverance, confidence, and a "can do" attitude.

Answer 5

thank you to you as well! i am so grateful for your help!