Question

here is a story
@Destinycholie @Destinymasha @One098 @Crissy15 @CREEPYMLPMASTER @marieislearning @arris04 @jordanloveangel @someoneamaznig204 @gigi1103 @GreenCat @i..am..legend @iGreen @WWWHHHAAATTTT?????

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wuts the story @MakaylaTracy

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im typing it

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oh k

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love life
love u say who can i love again or why do i need to love
it just sends me into a state of depression a state of tears rolling down my face
being hated by the one i love and the one i wanna love but he don't seem to wanna let me
in like he did before and it hurt me so much bc i love him like i have never loved anyone before and i thought me and him were forever and to think i left him in,....
he said i would never be like his other girl he lost due to depression and what am i now just a girl on his list that he loves bc he wants to be happy
i dont think i wanna be with u anymore
u broke me like no one every has
i knew this would be a bad idea but i said i love u to u for the past two years it made u hateful toward me.
making u put a smile on your face was just a way to hide behind ur dark soul ur bad heart and u r not so sweet smile
it turned out to be a smile i would last see in my life time
bc of u im missing
it has now hit 7 years since i was last seen
last talked to my family
see a happy face
and i person who really cared about me
i thought was u but i was wrong
and bc of u my sister died bc she had no one to talk to about her depression
my brother in a group for missing family members
mom and dad crying every single day bc they think im coming home to them
and i wanna tell them one last thing bc u took me and u took tnhat way from me so yea i died with my last words i was every going to talk to them and say mom and dad i am so sorry for not listening to u about the dance i went anyway i took the car and that is why there is a case of beer int he back seat when u asked me i play dumb about it so i wanted to tell u but i didnt know how
so thanks to u i never said good bye to anyone u took my life before i was ready to died im dead no one will find me
i screamed so loud but no one heard me no one seem me
i was under the tree beside the river
u walked right on me but it was to late i was dead and nothing would change that
he put me hear alive and waited till i dead before he gave up my final resting place in the earth he put me there bc he it meant something to me
i cried bc i knew i would never speak to anyone ever again
till i was found there 10 years after u killed me
my mom was crying to hard she passed out
dad was looking like he was dead inside my little bro was crying on the floor and i was looking down on them bc they knew i was watching them and wanting to say the one last thing i never go to say was MOM DAD I LOVE U SO MUCH I DONT WANNA HURT U ANYMORE

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@kittycat123 @this_emo_chic1023

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WOW ITS AMAZING <3

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thanks

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yeah np

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that's a really emotional story love it great job

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@Raven011 @rebecca99 @rebeka @redeemed1312 @Rainbow_dashie @Race100 @RainbowCupcake7997 @thesweetheart3 @misty1212 @MilenaSaeger @Morgan0608 @monyvia23 @PyroYolka @quickstudent @ROSEQUEEN2014 @TheSmartOne @Nnesha @shifuyanli @shelby1290 @ShayleeCutie @eliasperez191 @Loveless13

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thank u @kittycat123

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yes???

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read the story

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wow!reallly great ;)

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thxs

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whay is thiss

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a story

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is it true

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its fiction

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cool

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yea

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soo

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soo

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so sad @MakaylaTracy and beautiful

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I love it! @MakaylaTracy

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@ScarlettGrace<3 @savannah152426 @Sandygreene

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Great work!

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@ScarlettGrace<3
thank u at @One098

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Great job

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thank u

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@Angel_Bear19 @angelaferrari @AngieLovesYouxx @anthony4444 @Ashleyisakitty @kristyn-whitaker

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@taylor12344

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@sleepyjess @jordan96 @billj5

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o my gosh this is flutter!ng amazing!!!! @MakaylaTracy

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thank u

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Great job!

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thxs

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here is another i have been working on

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i hated him more bc he lied to me
iu always said to me i would never lied or tell u something i didnt want u to find out on your own
and u only did that bc u said u didnt wanna hurt me
but........
u have always lied to me
it was not only that one time it was every since we met i knew u were hiding so much from me
and i was hiding alot from u too but u lied to me when we were just talking
but when we went out for a bit i knew it was going to make it harder for me bc i was holding this back and i didnt want u to be upset with me
so i lied to but
u lied more and more and more to me i just could not take it anymore
i when home that night and cried my self to sleep more and more every day we are talking and then we just stop talking
but
then i found out why
u wrote a letter to me and placed it on your dresser
and your mom mailed it to me
so i got it in the mail so i opened it
u had said good bye to me u didnt know who to tell me on the phone
so u wrote it down and once u were gone it was mailed to me
i wasn't sure if this was just a joke so i called your gf and she said he loved u so much and u hurt him
i never hurt him
he lied to protect u
bc he knew if he fell in love with a girl from out of state he would not be able to say good bye to you
he meant more to u than he did me said the girl
i had no idea what he was hiding
till..........
i opened the second letter i got in the mail a few days later
it says i am so sorry u are getting these letters so soon
i never meant to say good bye this way
but
i have been hiding this from u
when we first started to talk i was int he ER int he ICU
and i didnt wanna tell u bc then u would come here to see me and i didnt want u to see me this way
if i seen u IRL i would have ran to u and kisses u and huged u before it was my time to leave we would have spent years together before my time had run out
and then i knew what he meant but that he was dying there was nothing any doctor could do
the only thing they could do was hope for a miracle and u were it
when i first seen the message pop up on my screen i was happy i was smiling and i was laughing my family came in the room and seen how happy i was they wanted to thank u and i never gave them the chance but when we broke up i hit my depression again and i stopped smiling laughing and being happy once i lost u i lost everything
u are my world u are my life u are my heart
but im broke and u were the cause that is why i could not call u message u kiss u once last time so i ended my life for u and i wanted u to follow but i told my mom not to tell u yet and to wait a few weeks so yea im so sorry babe i love u
if i see u here in heaven i will run to u and hold u tight in my arms and never let u go
i never meant for u to join me this soon so yea u could say he gave up bc i broke his heart so this makes me a bad person than so be it

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@Destinycholie @Destinymasha @One098 @Crissy15 @CREEPYMLPMASTER @marieislearning @arris04 @jordanloveangel @someoneamaznig204 @gigi1103 @GreenCat @i..am..legend @iGreen
@Raven011 @rebecca99 @rebeka @redeemed1312 @Rainbow_dashie @Race100 @RainbowCupcake7997 @thesweetheart3 @misty1212 @MilenaSaeger @Morgan0608 @monyvia23 @PyroYolka @quickstudent @ROSEQUEEN2014 @TheSmartOne @Nnesha @shifuyanli @shelby1290 @ShayleeCutie @eliasperez191 @Loveless13

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I wish I could give you more medals or better a trophy

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thanks

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@One098

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beautiful @MakaylaTracy

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Oh my gosh! That is seriously such a touching and beautiful story! I absolutely love it! <333

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thank u to everyone who has gave me medals and comments to these writings i really appreciate it . i am writing a few more writings and post them on here so i hope u like these others ones to

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happiness is suppose to be in every ones life
but in our world we have no happiness no love that does not end in death or heart break
we are suppose to have our happy ending like they do in the stories we were told as kids they are just fantasy they have no real meaning
so yea we dont have a happy ending
words dont compare to what im felling
its almost like im trapped in a dark cold wet place
i can get out
someone plz help me im trapped can anyone hear me????
i scream
i yell out your name but i hear no answer
i bang on the cage door
i hear a small shallow voice saying every thing will be okay?
can u help me out ?
he says no this is where u belong
i scream louder and louder
he hits me
i placed my hand on my face and crawl back into a small area of the cage
i sat back and just cried and cried and cried
at that moment i knew how it felt to be taken bc i was the next girl taken
i knew i was never going home i asked god for one thing before i was gone from the world forever
let my mom and dad know i never meant to leave u like this i was taken from my room that night i broke down crying in your arms u knew something was wrong but u didnt ask
so i figured u didnt care so thats why i didnt scream cry or yell out your name while u are sleeping
and yet u would not have heard me calling ur name if i did bc u are a heavy sleeper
so i didnt even bother to say or do anyhting at the moment
i left with no care in the world
i left u a video on my camera
for u and my friends send it to them for me i love u and tell them im sorry for not yelling out to u an dad
and yet i still wanted to talk to them just one last time and if i did
i would tell them i love yall so much live your life like never even exsisted so yea u could say i wanted to leave but then i cried and scream your names out in case u were looking for me but i never heard u or her or him answer my prayers
so im gone now
no one is going to find me
im laying in a drain some where i dont know where but if u find me beatten to death
i felt no pain bc i was already hurt
so dont feel like i felt anything
i never feel people hitting me
so i love u
bye from this world

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@Destinycholie @Destinymasha @One098 @Crissy15 @CREEPYMLPMASTER @marieislearning @arris04 @jordanloveangel @someoneamaznig204 @gigi1103 @GreenCat @i..am..legend @iGreen
@Raven011 @rebecca99 @rebeka @redeemed1312 @Rainbow_dashie @Race100 @RainbowCupcake7997 @thesweetheart3 @misty1212 @MilenaSaeger @Morgan0608 @monyvia23 @PyroYolka @quickstudent @ROSEQUEEN2014 @TheSmartOne @Nnesha @shifuyanli @shelby1290 @ShayleeCutie @eliasperez191 @Loveless13

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@butterflydreamer @demonchild99 @sleepyjess @sassydiva321 @misty1212

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holy mass tagging

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haha

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please don't do that

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lol...jess

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sorry

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what @demonchild99 ? it is against the CoC

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dang...since when do u not call me simi....im a little hurt....and...ik...i was just saying lol...cus the way u announce yourself

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lol sorry, it is morning, I am extremely tired, now, to read this story...

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ok...btw love it @MakaylaTracy

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thank u so much i wanna write a book @demonchild99

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lol..cool...im working on one right now...lol..i wrote about it in my bio...lol...it will be called the unexpected

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Wow..... that is amazing. Hopefully at some point you plan on writing out the full words instead of "bc, u, r" and adding punctuation?

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dang jess u sound smarter then me atm.....lol..well u r but still...lol...and how is twix

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holy crud...i just realized...your not yellow

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it was just my rafted draft

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wow simi, you are really behind, and twix is fine lol
Glad to know that :)

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yea im slow...ive been trying to catch up in school...lol

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oh your writing style is amazing :) YOU SHOULD BE VERY PROUD !! <3 @MakaylaTracy

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thank u so much @butterflydreamer
i wanna become a writer when i grow up

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haha you should definitely pursue it :))!

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thx

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why dont you wright a story now? xD i have seen it happen, but if you do you. probably make it an autobiography so it is all about you. also Great storys.

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thanks and i think i might do that @Demonx341

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this is amazing as always @MakaylaTracy <3

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thxs @Destinycholie

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@YouSir @EmogirlAtEmoooocow @wizfan @quickstudent @hastunemiku31 @kristyn-whitaker

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Thanks for linking me here. @sleepyjess

*hands out medal*

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hehe

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Greayt job!! Keep up the good work!!

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om glob i love it the best thing ive ever read

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@Clalgee

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good job

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One word - amazing.