Read these sentences from the passage:
The colour of eyes seems to be significant of temperament, but as regards beauty there is little or nothing to choose among colours. It is not the eye, but the eyelid, that is important, beautiful, eloquent, full of secrets.
When writing narrative essays, writers often revise the original sentences several times, for example, to remove unnecessary adjectives or adverbs in a modern essay. Which revision best captures the meaning of these two sentences?

Question

Read these sentences from the passage:
The colour of eyes seems to be significant of temperament, but as regards beauty there is little or nothing to choose among colours. It is not the eye, but the eyelid, that is important, beautiful, eloquent, full of secrets.
When writing narrative essays, writers often revise the original sentences several times, for example, to remove unnecessary adjectives or adverbs in a modern essay. Which revision best captures the meaning of these two sentences?

kohai · Answer

Post this in English, please