The room was dark and damp with only one ray of light that shown through the only window in my cell. The walls are littered with scratch marks from a fork I used to track the days and nights. On one wall was a stick figure with an "X" through its abdomen. The prisoner before me left writing on the wall that said, "Get me out of here!."

This a setting of a story I'm writing for a local writing contest. Tell me what you guys think.

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The room was dark and damp with only one ray of light that shown through the only window in my cell. The walls are littered with scratch marks from a fork I used to track the days and nights. On one wall was a stick figure with an "X" through its abdomen. The prisoner before me left writing on the wall that said, "Get me out of here!."

 This a setting of a story I'm writing for a local writing contest. Tell me what you guys think.

anonymous · Answer

awesome eerie feel!