Question

Trying to write a song; Genre; Rock/War (not sure if war is a thing) Something similar to: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x168ess_warriors-of-the-world-manowar-ultramarines-music-video_music (Youtube link:) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cx81P9p1exA

Im not trying to copy, i want more of a rock similar to this...Any recommendations? (You will get credit for helping too)

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@SaltLife23

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@One098 @CausticSyndicalist

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hello everybody

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Hey. So, yeah im working on it now

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hows the lyrics coming

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any ideas on how we could start?
and if my song gets popular or anything, you get some credit off of it. :)

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everything i think of doesnt really go together, or is already part of a song

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ummmmm let me think

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@akonkel

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Right now, what i can even think of as a start is; Here we stand, from all around the universe, waiting in a line, to hear our battle cry.
We all are gathered here; Victory is near

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Thats what i have come up with so far

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now to find a beat lol

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so put your weapons in the air now cause victory's here

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I like it so far.

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umm what kind of beat are you looking for ; fast slow

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more or less fast.

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at the beginning, its a little slow (like warriors of the world)
then it gets faster

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type in Hudson mohawke_chimes at youtube and tell me what you think

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one second. gonna find a pair of earbuds.

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did you listen to it

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not yet. little brother got headset tangled up.

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alright im gonna listen to it now

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Like that at the beginning, but a little more heavier on the drums

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Bingo. at 0:50

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yea I didn't know if you would like the drums

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the drums will be that low a the beginning

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at*

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:50 and 1:25

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the drums will be that low the ENTIRE song.

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lmao ok

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lol yeah

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overall what do you think?

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The song is okay, but i loved it when the drums got low. the low drums will definitely be in the song

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(i lead a "Garage band")

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or well, i will when we start making songs LOL

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lol okie dokie

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or try wiggle by trapped planet

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I dont really like the beginning

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But the guitar, it will be in the song as well. As well as a piano, playing low keys

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(for wiggle, i dont like the beginning)

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ok ummmm I look for more

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and the voices in the background of Warriors of the world, That will also be in there, (similar to it)

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sweet this is really coming together

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dude. im getting ideas.

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brb. gonna start typing into notepad.

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heres what i have so far

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Here we stand, from all around the universe, waiting in a line, to hear our battle cry.
We all are gathered here, Victory is here, So put your weapons in the air!
we own the right, to fight the fight, Now swear your blood for life, will never dry!
For we are warriors, warriors of our universe!

They stand against us, but we are stronger.
They said that we would not rise up, but they were wrong!
We are water against fire; They are weak and we are strong!
My brothers, Let us have our revenge!

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(its stuck saying im typing for some odd reason)

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what do you think so far?

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dude...ive got atleast half a song already

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its awesome so far bruh

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@SaltLife23 iiiiiiiiiimmmmmmmmmmm baaaaaaaaaaaack

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@Musics_life

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whats up bro im back to

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Cool
also, i went through and did a few adjustments

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still working on it.

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(Intro) We march for life, and we shall know no fear!


(music starts)
Here we stand, from all around our worlds, waiting in a line, to hear our battle cry.
We all are gathered here, Victory is here, our gods will do their jobs, bringing power to us all!
we own the right, to fight the fight, Now swear your blood for life, will never dry!
Stand and fight together, Beneath the Evil Sky!


They stand against us, but we are stronger.
They said that we would not rise up, but they were wrong!
We are water against fire; They are weak and we are strong!
We are the tools of the gods, we are thunder wind and rain!

My brothers, Let us have our revenge!
Rise up my brothers, We are wolves; they are mere sheep, for we are warriors, warriors of our worlds!
We fight for alien-kind and man-kind; We will rip our predators open!
Stand and Fight together, and we will have Victory!
And if I should fall in battle, Gather my Weapons and hammer, Tell my family how I died for their freedom!
Until then, I will be strong, i will fight back all that is evil, for we are warriors, warriors of our worlds!
We are warriors, warriors of our worlds!
Like thunder from the sky, sworn to fight and die, we are warriors, warriors of our worlds!

Brothers everywhere, Raise your weapons into the air, for we are warriors, warriors of our worlds!
Like thunder from the sky, sworn to fight and die, we are warriors, warriors of our worlds!

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Its supposed to be like aliens and mankind allied to fight back evil

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Seems great to me. Wish I could make music. Lol. But, don't really know how. Sorry, I couldn't be of any help.

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I got to come up with more lyrics

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have you found a beat yet

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Did YOU do that ANTHEM in ur links ???

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Just read the question again and you want to do something like that. It's VERY COOL ! Kinda a cross between Trans-Siberian Orchestra and Jack Black