Ask your own question, for FREE!
English 17 Online
OpenStudy (chycora):

plzz help

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

What's your question? :)

OpenStudy (chycora):

Climbing Mount Everest (1) Standing at 29,029 feet in the air, Mount Everest is located in the Himalayas between Nepal and China. For many adventurers, climbing Mount Everest is the greatest feat that can be achieved in the world. It is a dangerous climb, and many people have died in the attempt. But for the people who succeed, the chance to actually stand on top of the world is well worth the risk. (2) In 1953, Sir Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay became the first people in recorded history to stand on top of Everest. It took them over two months from the time they set up base camp, but on May 29, they reached the summit. After they got back, people wanted to know which one of them had been the first one to the top. They told people that they both had been the first to reach the top because it had been a team effort. After a few years, though, Tenzing Norgay said that it was Hillary that had stood on the top first. He added, “If it is a shame to be the second man on Mount Everest, then I will have to live with this shame.” (3) Many others have since followed in the footsteps of Hillary and Norgay. To date, more than 1,300 climbers have completed the climb. While it is still an amazing feat to climb Everest, it has become easier due to advancements in climbing equipment and better knowledge of how to climb it. A 13-year-old American climber reached the top in 2010. In 2008, a 76-year-old man from Nepal reached the summit. (4) However, Mount Everest has also been the site of much tragedy. On May 10, 1996, eight climbers died on Everest trying to climb down in a blizzard. That year, fifteen people died on Everest, the most in any year on Mount Everest. People can freeze outside or suffer from a lack of oxygen. (5) In the end, Hillary and Norgay spent only about 15 minutes on the summit of Everest. To some, risking one’s life and spending two months on a mountain is too great a cost for getting a scenic view for only 15 minutes. Others, however, point to the fact that Hillary’s and Norgay’s names will live on for centuries and think that is worth the risk. As Sir Edmund Hillary might tell you, “nothing ventured, nothing gained.”

OpenStudy (chycora):

Which of the following sentences should be added to the beginning of paragraph 1? Edmund Hillary was the first person to climb Mount Everest, but he wouldn't have made it without Tenzing Norgay. The highest point of land elevation on Earth is the summit of Mount Everest. Sir Edmund Hillary, from New Zealand, became the first person to climb the summit of Mount Everest. There are many wonderful attractions to visit in Nepal, but the most popular is Mount Everest.

OpenStudy (chycora):

@EclipsedStar

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Do you have any ideas so far?

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

The first paragraph basically gives details on the mountain itself...

OpenStudy (chycora):

ok thanx

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

However the last sentence mentions people that climb...

OpenStudy (chycora):

so D

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

No, it won't be D..

OpenStudy (chycora):

o and yea it is

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

The last sentence mentions "succeeded".

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

"people who succeeded"

OpenStudy (chycora):

so A

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Yes, you're correct :D

OpenStudy (chycora):

yea thanx

OpenStudy (chycora):

it was B

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

That doesn't really make sense...the last sentence mentions "people" though :/

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Sorry :(

OpenStudy (chycora):

it's kool ur amazing person so keep helpin

Can't find your answer? Make a FREE account and ask your own questions, OR help others and earn volunteer hours!

Join our real-time social learning platform and learn together with your friends!
Can't find your answer? Make a FREE account and ask your own questions, OR help others and earn volunteer hours!

Join our real-time social learning platform and learn together with your friends!